Not trying to be picky because many designs exist but ... how big are the eyelids supposed to be. From this image the model looks off. Could just be me since I am tired.

I'm not sure what you mean lol

Here's 2 other images I've rendered using the same character
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/51660474/
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/50716754/

If you think something is off, let me know, I'd be happy to check and improve it

The way the eyesocket eye lids stretch so far back toward the ears. Can you show me rac with a spooked face. Big eyes wide open?

It somehow looks off to me like you can almost see the back part of the eye. It could just be me but it feels off. I had trouble modeling the eyes on vice for some time but I nearly got it. Something about the eay rac squints was making me feel uneasy about the model for a while now. Im curious of how that will change now that i said something

Oh yeah, he simply has big eyes
If you're curious, it's basically a modified version of the Rexouium avatars for VR Chat
The eyelids are on an angle, (let's say 45° or so) meaning if the character is looking ahead, we'll see the side of his eyes
I think that's what you're referring to

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/48383655/
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/49049093/

The armor vaguely reminds me of parts of the Ebony set from the Elder Scrolls series, specifically Morrowind.

how much health does this boss have?

Yes

Understandable, have a great day. o_o

netherite armor with gold trim