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Chosen of Ashurha IV: Thy Kingdom Come

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A new installment of the fantasy/adventure Chosen of Ashurha series, in which Queen Vorel Ashurha attempts to ally Ezba Khamis with the kingdom of Visharna- but the viscount does not trust her, having heard rumors of her vile evil.

Rough draft; critique is MUCH appreciated.

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15 years ago

I don't see any problems or fallacy in this part nor the other three. You write very well and have a strong balanced style. In fact good critique maybe hard for you to come by. Best of luck with the rest.

Lolitaofthevoid ~lolitaofthevoid

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15 years ago

Thank you! That means a lot to me.

MakotoIshinobi ~makotoishinobi

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15 years ago

i must read the others , becouse i like this much xD, nice handling to put me in want to know what happen in every paragraph XD

Lolitaofthevoid ~lolitaofthevoid

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15 years ago

Really? Awesome! And thank you for the favorite =]

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15 years ago

This is your best story yet. Great work.

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15 years ago

Thank you very much.

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