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Here are some screenshots from animated footage made for XDragoon - The Animated Series April Fools Trailer (You can watch it here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=loI5tsyweE8 )
Rocky´s Animated sequence was part of Burst Fist sequence, this was the first time ever I animated with a tablet. Renata´s short scene was a rough test only, which I decided to color in the last moment and Berry´s one, I wanted to test some lightining effects (was the first one animated)
Chapter 13 also reaches for it´s conclusion! ;)
XDragoon #13: Almighty Alfred
Script, Art and Colors: Felipe Marcantonio
Translation Revision: Jim Eriksson
Pages: 48
FEBRUARY 2011
ENGLISH
26 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg026.php
27 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg027.php
28 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg028.php
29 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg029.php
30 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg030.php
31 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg031.php
32 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg032.php
33 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg033.php
34 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg034.php
35 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg035.php
36 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg036.php
37 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg037.php
38 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg038.php
39 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg039.php
40 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg040.php
41 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg041.php
42 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg042.php
43 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg043.php
44 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg044.php
45 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg045.php
46 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg046.php
47 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg047.php
48 - http://www.xdragoon.com/eng/comics/013/pg048.php
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26 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg026.php
27 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg027.php
28 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg028.php
29 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg029.php
30 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg030.php
31 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg031.php
32 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg032.php
33 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg033.php
34 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg034.php
35 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg035.php
36 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg036.php
37 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg037.php
38 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg038.php
39 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg039.php
40 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg040.php
41 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg041.php
42 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg042.php
43 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg043.php
44 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg044.php
45 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg045.php
46 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg046.php
47 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg047.php
48 - http://www.xdragoon.com/port/comics/013/pg048.php
Category Artwork (Digital) / Anime
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File Size 139 kB
English teacher powers, go!
Page 29:
"I, the Great Caesar, promise your demise to be gentle."
Since you're using I as the subject, the verb should be promise, not promises.
Page 37:
"You think I'll be a pushover 'cause you're bigger than me? A real fighter never underestimates his opponent!"
This was missing the article a, along with his. It was also a run-on sentence, so it should be separated like this.
Page 39:
"With the Leopard's forfeit, Alfred is the winner!"
This is really minor but it's better to use the possessive form of 's rather than use of. Using of results in awkward phrasing with ownership.
Page 44:
"What's in the envelope?"
Hope this helps ^^
Page 29:
"I, the Great Caesar, promise your demise to be gentle."
Since you're using I as the subject, the verb should be promise, not promises.
Page 37:
"You think I'll be a pushover 'cause you're bigger than me? A real fighter never underestimates his opponent!"
This was missing the article a, along with his. It was also a run-on sentence, so it should be separated like this.
Page 39:
"With the Leopard's forfeit, Alfred is the winner!"
This is really minor but it's better to use the possessive form of 's rather than use of. Using of results in awkward phrasing with ownership.
Page 44:
"What's in the envelope?"
Hope this helps ^^
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