That was weirdly surreal and kinda dream-like. Nicely done. :3

Thank you, your Majesty Wolf! *bows before you*

Uhm... putting that aside, I hope that it wasn't too convoluted and the thing with narrator I had on my mind was clear. Thanks very much for reading and commenting. ^.^

That's quite the adventure and it was certainly fun to see that pesky narrator getting taken down a peg!

Also, that song (or rather the version) you linked was unironically very funny, thank you for sharing.

Thanks. ^^ And for the fave too. Very nice of you to read and comment and everything; I appreciate that very much. Overall hard to say if a story is crappy or good just by myself, so it's amazing when someone comments and I hope they really liked reading it and so on. If someone was to criticize it, it would be the best because it means someone cares.

And yeah, that song has so many versions. :P I wish you a great day/evening then, dear content existence. ^_^

Quite meta as other comments point out! A rather fun read!

Wow. Hello there, plushie Rhino. Sorry for weird fragments that needed proofreading in the story; it has a few of these.

And thank you for reading it and then even faving it. It's very nice. I hope it was fun enough for you and I appreciate you taking the time for it. ^^

Of course I had fun! Reading others work hopefully will improve my own. The interaction of narrator and the story is something I've never considered before.

Try not to stress too much about the flaws you see. The goal is to get better, not be perfect. Or that's my philosophy anyway! Hope to see more unique things from you in the future!

Hello! Well done with this story, it was quite the spectacle to read.

I enjoyed your creativity and world building. It sort of reminded me of a Sir Gawain and the Green Knight, meets The Great Divorce, meets Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy. Whimsical, catastrophic, and humorous. While also precise.

The found the Jiangshi as well as all the animal characters were very fascinating, cute but also mysterious. And I liked the narrator scenes. Thank you for your work, I look forward to more!

Hello! :3 And that's a very nice comment, thanks! And these are interesting books that came to your mind. Hmmm, I will have to read at least one of them, probably The Great Divorce. I uhhh may have not really read much in terms of books like that. Thanks for mentioning them, especially in the context of your thoughts after reading my story!

And it's important to note that I'm not any sort of writer, so it isn't something I would consider work. Just a whimsical thing I have done. Well, maybe my way of Howling and Heheing About among the furries. o.O

Thank you again very much for reading and the comment! And even faving too! Also that's very flattering that you found the characters cute and mysterious. ^^ And everything else that was among your thoughts about the story!

Całkiem ciekawa historia, ma w sobie coś lekko zwariowanego. Najbardziej spodobało mi się wprowadzenie narratora jako realnej postaci, będącej na dodatek "antagonistą" i jego stanowcza odmowa do przedstawienia historii z punktu widzenia głównych bohaterów. : ) Oraz powóz ciągnięty przez osły wskrzeszone przez wilka nekromantę

Ogółem zawsze lubię historie o zbieraninie różnych istot podróżujących ze sobą, z których każda ma swój własny charakter.

Haha, dzięki. ^^ Moją inspiracją trochę był film "Przygody barona Munchausena", więc takie elementy jak to trochę szaleństwo i nawet tytuł mogą mieć źródło w tym. Poza tym też ta muzyka która została zalinkowana w opisie. Przykładowo czerwone niebo miało być jak komunistyczna czerwień i tak dalej, lol. To miały być trochę takie komunistyczne Chiny, co mi się wydawało trochę ciekawsze niż po prostu takie typowe wuxia fantasy. Generalnie cel był taki by to było o Jiangshi, ale wydawało mi się być fajnym pomysłem zrealizować takie dziwne pomysły jak to z tym narratorem na przykład.

I fajnie że polubiłeś ten pomysł z powozem ciągniętym przez wskrzeszone osły. xD Ogółem bardzo miły komentarz i dzięki za przeczytanie! Ja z mojej strony mam jeszcze sporo twoich rysunków i historii do przeglądnięcia. :P Xixi to fajna postać która też często się znajduje w trochę zwariowanych okolicznościach.

I'm somewhat lost, but I think I get what happened to a degree.

A very amusing and enjoyable read.

Oh, what do you think happened if you want to say?

And thanks. I am not a writer, but just yippy yappy fox who slams its paws against keyboard in a random way just for fun, but it was enjoyable to write and to read too hopefully.

Written for the aforementioned raven, based on her idea with the Jiangshi. Normally Jiangshi would appear in normal urban fantasy or wuxia, but I decided to go with something weirder.

Thank you for the fave too. I saw it yesterday and wanted to thank for it in a note about my idea for a story for the raffle you are doing, but since you wrote a comment here I will say thanks for it here.

Basically a soul snatching mage Narrator attacks a village, three guys pull up each in their own unique characteristics and manage to save their friend by stealing life energy back from the Narrator, only for him to make a break for it and all of them die and are reincarnated as feral cat hippies, or am I misreading?

Pish posh, that's as good enough to call you a writer; sometimes the best ways of writing is to just do it even if there is no reason behind it.

Very nice route, and definitely weirder.

You're welcome.
Oh? Well let me just mark you down then. Thank you for joining and I look forward to see what you're thinking.

Ah that's exactly what happened in the story. :P Maybe it isn't even reincarnation, but higher dimension they reached after death haha. I got that idea from reading about lyra feline starseeds lore, like here https://www.reddit.com/r/starseeds/.....e_star_family/ and https://www.intuitivemind.org/blue-.....e-star-beings/

Thanksies again Theological Writer. Good luck with your own writing. ^_^

Ooo, interesting.

No problem, and thank you; hope to get something done today.