As of right now I don't see to much wrong with this, it may be my speakers but in some parts the music seemed to dull really badly, but all together it isn't that bad.

I don't know the first thing about critiquing music, but I love this!

its not out of your league, your just evolving into an a list creator!

maybe XD But it is very different form all of my other stuff, have you listened to the finished version of this? I just uploaded it a little bit ago. XD

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5476314

when doing something that rakes ya brain, its worth doing for sure.
the finished version is so getting downloaded to my i pod :D i'd love to hear more in this style.

just curious, did ya use a classical track as ya basis for this or is it purely all ypu?

If you mean like taking a classical song and translating it into electronic, no. This entire song, melodies and name are all 100% original work, like all of my stuff. I'm terrible at doing remixes, lol. Every time I've tried I just end up making an exact copy of the song. XD I'll more than likely be doing more stuff in this style, I love it. I'm hoping that this will eventually become, sorta my 'signature sound'. :P

i have trouble remixing myself :P

the style in my opinion is more 'hardstyle-techno-trance' than classical... but kudos on doing it from the ground up :)

Thanks! But yea, when I tell people that I feel that hardstyle, techno, and trance have ties with classical symphonies, most of them say I'm crazy, lol. But maybe that's what makes me different. :P

true, there is a sense of the 'organic' (not the instrument :P) in this, but if ya want more of a 'symphonic overture' feel to it, (well in ya next song cause i like this how it is ^^ ) do listen to as much classical as ya can, one that id love to remix is this song's http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5W0vVpkvX4Y iconic section in the middle yet its a good song all round ^^

hopefully better than this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2dEreOWsvGg

... cant believe i found this -_-

I normally dnt really critique but I can see this song goin big sooo..
The intro sounds like it would be the middle of the song, what everything builds to, as far as a build, idk man, try using the actual piano piece if you have it, if not, make it, then slowly build into that big synth line. as far as that, just kinda mess around with the ending, i usually take out effects and instruments and change some notes, just a suggestion...OH and turn the kick down a little but, it seems to kick the shit outta everything else a little, but other than that, it sounds insane! can't wait to hear the full!

I made the full version a few days ago. XD I thought it turned out pretty decent.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5476314

no shit lol sorry, i havent really checked this for a lil bit lol XD my bad.

lol, it's all good. I don't expect everyone to be on FA every day. XD