now everything is exactly how i want it to be. except it is slightly annoying the process i hafta go through.... anyway, here it is exatly the way i want it.
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honestly the writing is a bit bland, not very descriptive outside of the action sequences and tends to jump tenses.
I like the fight and the overall concept, it just needs to be fleshed out a lot more. :3
Keep it up!