A bit of a slow start, but definitely picks up by the end. I was genuinely surprised when she started man-handling the poor bull-man which made me ask who, or even what, is she. A mystery for sure.

I will say that the use of minotaur rather than just a bull-man does conjure interesting imagery though. From the original myth in the labyrinth, to the works by Pablo Picasso, to the very strange minotaur from the tabletop game "The Clay that Woke" the name just conjures expectations that there is more to the servant than at first glance as well. Not sure if that's what you were going for or not, but just the name to me gives a sense of myth. Which in many ways, also creates an interesting dichotomy in that he seems entirely mundane compared to this enigmatic woman.

I'm glad to hear you seem to think things at least got a bit better by the end. Since this is a part of one of my bigger projects, the woman's eccentric behavior and ability does get explained but I wanted to leave it purposefully unexplained here (mostly because she has not properly been introduced yet).

I hadn't known that Picasso did anything minotaur-related, but that tabletop game sounds kind of fun. When I started the larger story, I was really thinking World of Warcraft tauren-like appearances, I just didn't want to call them tauren and opted for minotaur because I always liked the old Greek myth.

Thank you very much for having given it a read, much appreciated.

This one is your best yet, very well done and not at all what I expected from the beginning of the story!

I'm very grateful to hear you say you thought this one was one well done, thank you much for that and also for taking the time to read through it.

This was a fun read! Very detailed. I'm glad you didn't give up on it and powered through because it was definitely entertaining! ^w^

I'm glad you'd say you thought this one was fun. Thank you much for reading through it, it's much appreciated.

I enjoyed this. Certainly well written and well detailed. Though you are correct in that it does indeed feel like a side episode in a larger story.

I'm thrilled to hear you enjoyed this one; while it needs work, I really liked writing it up. I very much appreciate you taking the time to read over it, thank you much for that.