I’m looking forward to learning more about the lifestyle of the crew. We have an idea of how they do their hunting, but I’d love to see Voolvif witness firsthand how they go about their job. From accepted job to capture to delivery then payment.


Also, I love how you flesh out the characters to the point we forget they are fictional. It’s the best kind of writing; when readers need to be reminded it’s not real.

Thanks much.

The everyday life and working life of the Howling Cerberus crew will be shown in future chapters. It is allready set in my mind and in my script.
I only need to draw it.

Poor Voolvif... ...but yeah, he's going to need some time alone to process everything... though how long that'll be is anyone's guess... well, except yours', since you're the author.

I still hope Garwaff goes after Voolvif eventually... and the two eventually have themselves a little kiss.

It is new to me that readers started to ship my characters.^^

Is it? Huh! Well then, I shall be honored to be your first "shipper"! ;D

Indeed.
A sign that my characters are interesting.

They sure are! <3 *huuug*

Wonder if that child is truly separated from the struggles of the universe and the adults (and the teenager Ylva) or if he's this story's version of Gavroche from Les Miserables? I'd imagine it to be hard for anyone to find time to play with him ... unless they mix training and play: the twins use camping as survival, Rashka using piloting programs as racing games, Ylva playing 'Cops and Robbers' or rescuing the damsel in distress (one of the others restrained and hidden in one of the ships rooms or capturing someone to bring to the laundry room), pazaak or dejareek with the elder to challenge the mind, shooting practice with the others as target practice, etc.

You ask justified questions and one of them I will try to draw in my comic as a short side scenario.

I want to believe that Ullfr is correct about the young Jedi. This seems like a really good place for him with a good support group who will also help him hide.

I hope that the two alphas can learn to work together later.

This is to be revealed on the following pages.

Very behind but I'll try and slowly catch up with these comments.

As always your Shistavanen faces are wonderfully expressive and with this page once again some good insights into the personalities of each with their reactions to Voolvif's departure. Garwaff, compassionate as he is wanting to reach out to Voolvif and very likely would be racing after him if not for Vulver's hand on his arm, while Vulver though part of the pack given his own tendency to spend time alone with his thoughts can recognise Voolvif's need perhaps more than the others.

Yiva the huntress thinking in pragmatic terms and likely wondering if she's going to have to restrain Voolvif if he does try something foolish and working out the practicalities of doing so with a strong and skilled Jedi. Ullfr again offering the insight with his wisdom that comes with age, though I imagine he might himself be hoping that Voolvif won't do anything foolish and risk exacerbating his injuries.

Then we see Rashka as pack mother and alpha female, having a hold of Fennrer's shirtfront and giving him a gentle scolding, as he does look suitably abashed. Gentle and compassionate she might be, but at the same time firm when she needs to be.

exactly how I wanted the emotions to be transported *bows*

Of course he did

aye