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This is one of my Clone Wars era fan-fics.
Category Story / Miscellaneous
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 119px
File Size 8.4 kB
Listed in Folders
You write too! O_O good to see some multi talent. As for the fic, I'd say the concept is interesting, but the story was too short; it needed some background, some more layering, and some more action. Thus far however I applaud your attempt, and hope that by reading more your writing shall improve as well, and I hope my comments have helped in that regard.
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