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When you Break Free Chapters 3, 4, and 5
I think that I mentioned that I feel more productive in the cold. Here is the next installment in this story. As with the start of most my stories it feels a little slow, but I am super excited to see where I can take these characters. So as always please let me know in the comments what you liked or didn’t like about these chapters.
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Fox (Other)
Size 120 x 99px
File Size 54 kB
Yeah they are both having their own struggles with the dynamics of their new bodies. I really hope that I was able to explore some topics with what Sasha is dealing with, in an emotionally real but caring way. I will say though it is so nice writing someone as nice and loving as May.
I really love that the first chapter started with a time skip backwards. It lets us know they have some time still with May and arend in immediate danger of being taken away.
Poor kids... Tho Kevin is taking the whole situation way better, even if that may be the case because he got so young and May is very maternal. But i really wish to know what Kevin wished for >-<
Poor kids... Tho Kevin is taking the whole situation way better, even if that may be the case because he got so young and May is very maternal. But i really wish to know what Kevin wished for >-<
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