The SunOvaGun Saga Part 1: Cry Havoc and Release the Chakats by ChakatBombshell -- Fur Affinity [dot] net

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By ChakatBombshell,
posted 15 years ago Felina Feral worshiper

This is first ever collab written story and the 1st submission on Furaffinty.

Basically me and Teenkitsune have come together to make this storyline involving the crew abord my ship and the many dangerous missions undertaken by them.

I hope everybody Enjoys it please feel free to leave comments and advice if I've made some errors or things to add excitment to it just please don't lay into me with harse words (If you say it sucks at least buck up your words with why so I can improve.)

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WerewolfSS ~werewolfss

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15 years ago

I super scimmed the story beign in a bit of a rush but I'll read it fully later. Looks good so far and I wonder if the Sonovagun could handle with the Galatica my own ship.

ChakatBombshell ~chakatbombshell

Felina Feral worshiper

15 years ago

Thanks for reading Midsnow glad I had something to add to my page for once maybe I'll get more watchers huh.

WerewolfSS ~werewolfss

Writer

15 years ago

Could be I hope you get more watchers for sure. Send me a note with your MSN if you have it and we can chat online sometime. =^.^=

ChakatBombshell ~chakatbombshell

Felina Feral worshiper

15 years ago

I um don't have an MSN but I just got AIM a few moments ago.

WerewolfSS ~werewolfss

Writer

15 years ago

You can send me your AIM becasue MSN and AIM can talk to each other.

Teenkitsune ~teenkitsune

Novice Writer

15 years ago

For some odd reason it won't let me view the story, no matter how many times I click on it.

ChakatBombshell ~chakatbombshell

Felina Feral worshiper

15 years ago

Did you click download Teenkitsune thats how you useally get a story to come up here.

Teenkitsune ~teenkitsune

Novice Writer

15 years ago

Yeah, I did. Unfortunately every time I do it presents it in code format and not the written stuff.

ChakatBombshell ~chakatbombshell

Felina Feral worshiper

15 years ago

I'll see what I can do about it I'm computer dumb over here so it may take some time.

ChakatBombshell ~chakatbombshell

Felina Feral worshiper

15 years ago

Wow! Holy crap I'll see if I can ask around with my friends here and see if they know how to get a story up here in non-code format cause I screwed up yet again. *Shakes fist* "Curesed computer do something right for a change."

Teenkitsune ~teenkitsune

Novice Writer

15 years ago

Alright, sweet. How did you fix the problem by the way?

ChakatBombshell ~chakatbombshell

Felina Feral worshiper

15 years ago

I reformated it in Rich Text Format my friend chakat Midsnow suggested it.

truekaiser ~truekaiser

Writer

15 years ago

I skimmed through it and you might want to change one thing. you mistakenly refer to a chakat as 'he' instead of shi in one part. might want to correct that.

ChakatBombshell ~chakatbombshell

Felina Feral worshiper

15 years ago

Ah, thank you I'm glad I can have help from the readers or else my curse of moving to quickly cause me so many of these kind of errors, thanks again friend.

Kader_Kasumi ~kaderkasumi

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14 years ago

Briefly skimmed it (having been at work all day and hungry atm.) Looks pretty good! IDK if it was my computer or though but the paragraphs got wonky at the end. (like they were running all into one) Will sit down and fully read it once my food is done!

ChakatBombshell ~chakatbombshell

Felina Feral worshiper

14 years ago

Ah was done by both me and Teenkitsune and he sometimes forgets to space between paragraphs and I have a problem with run along sentences. I can make on sentence last an entire page sometimes cause I don't watch myself.

Kader_Kasumi ~kaderkasumi

Photographer

14 years ago

Ah, well I read all the way through it and it seems pretty darn good! Going to give chapter 2 a shot when I get off work at like midnight Central time. :P

goliathcpg ~goliathcpg

Crazy Cougar

14 years ago

Not a bad start. Some formatting issues (which can just be because I'm reading it on a machine different from the one that wrote it) made it a little hard to follow at times, but I it has made me want to read the other chapters too.

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