Well liked it dispute your mood. Very clean and love how it gets tot he sticking place chocked with emotion.

I'm very glad to hear you thought I got the emotion well. To be honest, I was thinking back on some of your transformation stories while trying to figure this one out. I don't think I quite matched the level of detail you manage to put in to your stories, but I gave it my best effort.

Thank you much for reading over this one.

It worked out, thick description got a long way. Living thick description and you have that here.

I liked it too. :P I liked the atmosphere and got immersed into the story, just using my imagination unconsciously. I guess it was well written enough then really.

Thank you very much for saying so; I'm happy to hear that I managed to build up something you found immersive. Thank you very much for reading through it.

It worked very well!

Enjoyed the story and what happened.

I'm glad to hear you say so and that you enjoyed it, thank you for looking it over.

This is so emotional. I got that the boy ended up leaving a friend of his when getting scared during a lightning storm. She died getting struck by lightning, which he saw, causing his guilt. Then, he finds the vial and note, visiting where she died. I really thought he transforms into a fox, but you made it come off as him dying and going to heaven with his friend.

I'm glad you thought the emotion really stood out, probably obvious I was really pushing for it.

Your interpretation is almost exactly what I was going for and helped me pinpoint some of the problem areas with this one, thank you very much for your thoughts and simply reading over it.

I didn't think about the problems with the story, but I'm glad to have helped.

Well, that's a horrific read, in a good way. You have a good way with your words, describing both emotion and body horror. Weirdly the story reminds me of "The Brothers Lionheart" by Astrid Lindgren, which is a fairy-tale about dead children.

Regarding your comment, it is not always bad to just write whatever comes to your mind without aim or plan. Yeah, stream of consciousness writing does not always produce very good results, but it is a good exercise in creativity, in my opinion.

Well written. This one definitely concentrates more on the emotion and descriptions, but not every piece needs to be full of action and dialogue. I enjoyed reading it.

I very much appreciate your thoughts on the story, thank you for that and also for reading through it.

I'm afraid I had not known "The Brothers Lionheart", but looked up a quick synopsis. In a sense, I suppose that is what I was going for. I'm glad you thought that the story went over well despite my own reservations about it.

Quite harrowing with some wonderful descriptions. Poor boy just couldn't escape the demons of his past.

I'm glad to hear you thought I got the descriptions down well, it was probably pretty obvious I was going for a rather bleak and frightening intro. Sometimes it's best to face past demons head-on, I think.

Thank you much for giving it a read.

It came across well, definitely one of the more intense pieces of transformation fiction.

I'm glad you thought so, thank you much for reading over it.

Well played and much enjoyed…

Vix

I'm glad you'd say so, thank you much for reading.

Of all the beautiful atmosphere and emotion in this piece, I think my favorite detail is the photographs being turned to face the wall. It's such a small detail, but it says so much. As much as I envy your way with description, small hints of deep emotion like that will always hit the hardest for me. One of my favorite pieces of yours ^^

I'm very glad to hear you thought that little detail went over well. I don't always think about the little things like that, but I feel when they're done right that they can be really impactful.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read over this one, much appreciated.