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Kenku The Trickster Thief
by Omnikitsune
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15 years ago
Well here it is; I've been working all vacation long on this as part of a trade between myself and Kenku. And what a whopper!!! 74 pages. I could hardly believe it when I finished writing it. I hope you like it Kenku. While I was working on it, I just got hit with the idea of making it a first person telling from the perspective of an old friend to our thief. So let me know how I did getting that across please? It's my first try at that perspective. Anyways, to the summary. Basically the idea is a thief discovers an artifact that allows him to tf into a fox at will, but as time goes on, it gets harder and harder to change back. I hope you enjoy the story cause that's all I'm gonna tell ya! :P You'll have to read to find the rest. I really wanted to get the character development right in this too. So let me know what you think and please be as specific as you can. But most of all, ENJOY!!!!!! :D
Oh, and I nearly forgot. I got the inspiration for the name from the thief in Oceans 13. I do not own that character and am not using said name for profit. There, legal disclaimer is now complete. Enjoy the story!
Oh, and I nearly forgot. I got the inspiration for the name from the thief in Oceans 13. I do not own that character and am not using said name for profit. There, legal disclaimer is now complete. Enjoy the story!
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*Mouth hangs open*
That, that my friend is, was, will be, amazing, cool, exciting and down right enjoyable.
Really enjoyed reading the story and getting to enjoy the pace, adventure and down right awesome plot line and twists. Very amazing and really well worth the time to read it.
I have been great, life is treating me well, and I cannot complain I am just very happy and enjoying life.
And I'm strangely in the mood for a cup of tea and some meatloaf now... :)
Very well written and just overall a wonderful story ^^
I have to admit when I read the part with the bear trap I chuckled because I wrote a fox tf story with a bear trap in it as well XD butine was nothing compares to this, ack I must stop soon before I overload this box with praise ^^
As for my works they aren't that good, I'm really just began to dabble into story writing so I'm definitely not the best, but I do the best I can with it at least ^^
And A WHOLE NOVEL!!!!!! ^_^ that sounds very exciting and I hope it does work out well for you. I don't really care about the tf being limited as long as it is exciting to read, I usually get through it all so I'd say go for it ^^
Well until April it is then ;) but why can't you read it on your parents computer?
Sounds inviting already but I'm sure this is still a ton if work to do.
2 things:
1) Finally a TF story that takes more than 2 minutes (for me) to read.
2) I lol'D at the "reading the Bible to induce drowsiness" part.
And the first person is NOT the on TF-ing.
This would make an epic movie!
Questions:
Can I try to adapt this to a screenplay?
Should I expand The Tale of Inari into a longer length than just a four part narrative?
I'll run it by him.
It's good.
-New account.