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It's an alternate Star Fox universe in which Fox and Wolf got married.
Fox is angry that Wolf doesn't want to take him on a new mission cause thinks his husband wants to be famous without him. But what if Wolf actually has a different reason for refusing?
It's an alternate Star Fox universe in which Fox and Wolf got married.
Fox is angry that Wolf doesn't want to take him on a new mission cause thinks his husband wants to be famous without him. But what if Wolf actually has a different reason for refusing?
Category Story / All
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I can already say up front I love the premise, that Fox and Wolf get married. There's a great deal of potential in that direction, so naturally I'm curious what you decided to go with.
Wolfie is a cute nickname for Wolf, haha. I think it's provocative that Fox is so immediately insulted that Wolf doesn't want him to go. Indeed, this is the lynchpin of the story, since Fox doesn't consider any possible reasoning behind this decision. He just instantly assumes Wolf is being selfish or has some other nefarious reason for trying to go alone.
Luckily it seems that Wolf is willing to explain himself in plain terms that Fox is also willing to understand. The screaming plays well with the emotional torment the both of them must be feeling. It's OK to scream sometimes. Context is everything.
I like the part where they are hugging each other in a long embrace, with the neon glow. It sounds extremely romantic and just overall a very delicious scene to drink in.
Oooh, good use of 'dissolving into each other', that sounds beautifully well rendered.
Wolfie is a cute nickname for Wolf, haha. I think it's provocative that Fox is so immediately insulted that Wolf doesn't want him to go. Indeed, this is the lynchpin of the story, since Fox doesn't consider any possible reasoning behind this decision. He just instantly assumes Wolf is being selfish or has some other nefarious reason for trying to go alone.
Luckily it seems that Wolf is willing to explain himself in plain terms that Fox is also willing to understand. The screaming plays well with the emotional torment the both of them must be feeling. It's OK to scream sometimes. Context is everything.
I like the part where they are hugging each other in a long embrace, with the neon glow. It sounds extremely romantic and just overall a very delicious scene to drink in.
Oooh, good use of 'dissolving into each other', that sounds beautifully well rendered.
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