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Prologue, Thoughts.
The first part to a about 80 page story that is unfortunatly in the works. This part is just about 19 pages long. It takes place in the near future after a plague has swept across the earth, and a new humanoid species is created. The story follows Bruce Matlow as he works in the newly formed Republican Federation as a covert sniper with Chris Tokai. But after a few years doing political assasinations Bruce starts to wonder if his targets deserve to die.
Please tell me what you think.
WARNING: there is some adult themes but I put it under general. But its nothing too horrible.
The first part to a about 80 page story that is unfortunatly in the works. This part is just about 19 pages long. It takes place in the near future after a plague has swept across the earth, and a new humanoid species is created. The story follows Bruce Matlow as he works in the newly formed Republican Federation as a covert sniper with Chris Tokai. But after a few years doing political assasinations Bruce starts to wonder if his targets deserve to die.
Please tell me what you think.
WARNING: there is some adult themes but I put it under general. But its nothing too horrible.
Category Story / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 80 kB
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Of course not! you don't need to be sexi to be a freak You can just eat doggie treats :p
Actually, it's more "I wear stuff that doesn't turn me into a walking billboard advertisment for companies who really don't need more money" kind of shirt guy :p
Of course not! you don't need to be sexi to be a freak You can just eat doggie treats :p
Actually, it's more "I wear stuff that doesn't turn me into a walking billboard advertisment for companies who really don't need more money" kind of shirt guy :p
Well, what kind of audience are you trying to appeal to? It's not TF, it's not particularly exciting, it's not mystery. I'm sorry, but the gay wolf furry market is rather small, and you don't have all that many of those kinds of watchers... :p
Truth hurts, doesn't it?
I would never! I especially despise american eagle apparel, and don't want anything to do with Nike or whatever else.
Truth hurts, doesn't it?
I would never! I especially despise american eagle apparel, and don't want anything to do with Nike or whatever else.
Well first of all good news I did find the second part. It was on my flash drive.
I guess. I was trying something different but I guess people like the sameness. Maybe I should make my stuff more Tf based from now on.
I suppose so.
Well you cant really avoid having some labeling on your clothes but you can at least avoid shirts that just have the company name.
I guess. I was trying something different but I guess people like the sameness. Maybe I should make my stuff more Tf based from now on.
I suppose so.
Well you cant really avoid having some labeling on your clothes but you can at least avoid shirts that just have the company name.
Yayzers! We get the second part! :p Now we see how far you go with that, and I might just finally have a counter to all your cave orgy comments!!!
Write whatever you want, and as much as you want. If people here don't read it, try to post it at a furry writing forum or something. Not writing or limiting your writing is the best way I know to kill your drive to write.
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I should really listen to my own advice :(
Poor Shaggy. But he's too funky to stay sad for long, and he's got Scooby with him
Yeah. If there is a message on the shirt, I only wear it if I agree with what it says. So I don't agree with Bentley, American Eagle and all that stuff.
Write whatever you want, and as much as you want. If people here don't read it, try to post it at a furry writing forum or something. Not writing or limiting your writing is the best way I know to kill your drive to write.
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I should really listen to my own advice :(
Poor Shaggy. But he's too funky to stay sad for long, and he's got Scooby with him
Yeah. If there is a message on the shirt, I only wear it if I agree with what it says. So I don't agree with Bentley, American Eagle and all that stuff.
oh please. Im not some horrible sexy time writer like you! My story is so touching it will have you crying!
Ah its not like you write a lot anywat
But he's like 18 and scooby only has lifespan of like 14 years! What will happen when he dies? I think Shaggy will become a dog treat-aholich.
Dont trust Gap or Old Navy. They have cool designs but they always manage to force their logo in there.
Ah its not like you write a lot anywat
But he's like 18 and scooby only has lifespan of like 14 years! What will happen when he dies? I think Shaggy will become a dog treat-aholich.
Dont trust Gap or Old Navy. They have cool designs but they always manage to force their logo in there.
Wadda ya mean, horrible sexy time writer? I know for a fact the furversion has touched you too! Let's just see how far it went...
Exactly, because I try to limit my writing to one story at a time...
Shaggy is 18??? I though he was like 24 or something, he was just a hippie who never learned to grow up!
Meh, I trust stuff with no brands, and with cheap prices. Notice how you usually pay more for the name too? :p
Exactly, because I try to limit my writing to one story at a time...
Shaggy is 18??? I though he was like 24 or something, he was just a hippie who never learned to grow up!
Meh, I trust stuff with no brands, and with cheap prices. Notice how you usually pay more for the name too? :p
We'll just have to wait and see, won't we? :p What will come next after that gay sniper, I wonder...
And it makes me not want to write that one story and start so many others... That is not good, I do not write nearly enough :(
I didn't know he still went to school! He must've skipped a lot of classes to go with Scooby and the others...
The most awesome stuff is never freshly produced off an assembly line.
And it makes me not want to write that one story and start so many others... That is not good, I do not write nearly enough :(
I didn't know he still went to school! He must've skipped a lot of classes to go with Scooby and the others...
The most awesome stuff is never freshly produced off an assembly line.
And you blame me for how fast I write
I know I know. But now, with vacations well and truly started, I will have more tiem! Yay! Also ,I will try to write some short unrelated stories while on vacation, so you might expect maybe a story or two when I get back...
Eating disorder? What are you talking about? It's clearly a typical case of a bottomless stomach! Food goes in and disappears! He never gets fat, he never gets full, he always needs to eat more! It's not a disorder :p
I'll have to agree with you on that one, macs are awesome from even before they are assembled :p
I know I know. But now, with vacations well and truly started, I will have more tiem! Yay! Also ,I will try to write some short unrelated stories while on vacation, so you might expect maybe a story or two when I get back...
Eating disorder? What are you talking about? It's clearly a typical case of a bottomless stomach! Food goes in and disappears! He never gets fat, he never gets full, he always needs to eat more! It's not a disorder :p
I'll have to agree with you on that one, macs are awesome from even before they are assembled :p
True. Speaking of which, I have finished 3/4 of the planning of Ch.1, and around 1/4 of the writing. Does that mean Im 4/4 of the way there? :p
I didn't even have time to write in vacation
Yup, you have to bring him back to the manifacturer so he can fix the defect. You still have the warranty, don't you?
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I didn't even have time to write in vacation
Yup, you have to bring him back to the manifacturer so he can fix the defect. You still have the warranty, don't you?
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