The sun rises on a new day filled with action, adventure, playful romance, and suspicion. The sea changes its face, but it's not alone. Wisty and Ajumia take off on the beginning of their journey... what's in store?
This is, obviously, part 2 of the series I was writing as a gift for
Ajumia detailing the adventures of the princess and her royal guard, Wisty. They were swept along, and with the new day coming, they creep closer and closer to discovery. I rather like the way this turned out, but I think the dialogue could use some work; Wisty needs fleshed out, but that'll come later in the storyline. Any comments are appreciated! I hope you all enjoy it! :D
This is, obviously, part 2 of the series I was writing as a gift for
Ajumia detailing the adventures of the princess and her royal guard, Wisty. They were swept along, and with the new day coming, they creep closer and closer to discovery. I rather like the way this turned out, but I think the dialogue could use some work; Wisty needs fleshed out, but that'll come later in the storyline. Any comments are appreciated! I hope you all enjoy it! :D
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Western Dragon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 25.8 kB
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