I would LOVE to see you continue this fanfic AugieDog!

I think you got the existing characters down correctly and I love your main character Barbelle!

The fact that you gave Barbelle a reason to doubt herself and feel weak at the end of the story, despite her strength, makes her a far more believable and realistic character. I also like how you recognized that her strength doesn't make her perfect (Something WAY to many FMG stories do lately). I applaud you for your attention to these details!

I would love to see you continue this story and I really want to find out what happens next!

Thanks!

Act Two's in the final polishing stages and should be up tomorrow, and I've got a good start on Act Three. Since it's a cartoon show, there's gotta be three acts with commercial breaks between, right? :)

LOL, yeah!

I've had more fun working on this than anything I've ever done, so I'm glad you liked it!

Wow. That is actually really good. Getting into the head of a powerlifter. Love the way you paint the scene.