Sixes Wild: Showing a Pair
by Tempe O'Kun
Sheriff Jordan Blake gets a surprise visit from a bunny outlaw.
My thief breezes into the office.
Silver pistol at each hip, the hare stands before my desk. A long coat sways in the hot breeze, dust trailing off like a vapor. That smoky muzzle gleams a smile under stormy eyes.
A quick paw locks the door. The bunny's boots ring on the floorboards. "Howdy, lawbat."
"Six..." A pen drops from my hind paw, staining the cuff of my trousers and making a Dalmatian of the document. I jump up, but not in time to save them. "Aw, heck!"
"That's a fine way to greet a lady." A touch out of breath, she tilts my muzzle up into a kiss. The ghost of a cigarette haunts her lips.
Warmth floods my wings. The ink-stained pants and the intervening time since our last kiss vanish from my concern, leaving only the bunny standing over me. The kiss ends in a little rub of noses. "So you're a lady now?"
"Much as ah've ever been." Her muzzle aligns on mine like a compass needle. I wish that compass didn't lead her so far afield between kisses.
"Who're you running from now?"
"Nobody with fair odds a' catchin' me."
"Fair odds and you don't run together." My wings trace around her hips, finding that fluff of a tail.
Her caress falls on my wings like Arizona rain. "Never hear you complain when they're in your favor."
We kiss again. Sunlight spills in around us, discernible even when I close my eyes, just like the bunny in my wings. Our muzzles slide along each other until our foreheads touch. The window's dusty and the door's locked; in this rare moment I'm alone with her.
"You could always stay." Whispering, I smile, a trifle unsteady.
"You could always go." Her paw grazes my badge.
Not wanting to dwell on impossibilities, I rise into another kiss, letting my tongue trail along her lips.
She giggles, backing off just a little. "Ease off there, sugarwings. Yer kissin' is a mite distractin'."
"Reckoned that's the point." I kiss the corner of her smile.
"You can distract me in a moment's time. Right now I got a little something for you." Her long coat slips down those elegant arms, showing the delicate shades of her fur. She withdraws something from a pocket, then drops the coat to the floor in a heap. A parcel sits in her grasp, brown paper blending with the shades of her fur.
My ears flatten. "Something you stole?"
"Bought--" She tilts the paper-wrapped object. "I know you're all particular."
"Bought with stolen funds."
Her claws scritch under my chin, her voice losing its edge and most of its smoke. Her ears go down. "Ya want what I got or not?"
Helpless against her bunny charms, my wing thumbs trace the curve of her back.
She kisses me down into my chair, handing me the gift.
Touching it strikes my wings like electricity. "It's cold!"
"That it is, lawbat."
I laugh, holding it gingerly. Seems today comes full of surprises. "You come across an icebox out in the desert?"
"You don't expect a bunny to go tellin' you all her secrets, do ya?"
I slip the parcel paper off it, finding it to be a bottle marked with exotic glyphs and symbols.
"Some manner a' Oriental sarsaparilla. Seein' as you're so keen on fruit."
I turn the jade glass bottle over and try to twist off the cap. "Sarsaparilla's not a-- Wait, how'd you come to know what it says?"
Pushing aside the papers, she sits on my desk. "Got it from an otter chemist in California."
"And you take his word on that?" I struggle at opening it with my wings, since reaching up with hind paw would be uncouth.
"Gave him cause to tell me the truth." Her powerful legs cross before me. "Try it. I don't reckon it's even liquor. Least I think that's what he said. Talked a mite funny."
"You --huuh!-- inspire nothing but confidence, madam." I wrestle with the cap.
She snatches the bottle from my wings and raps it hard against the edge of my desk. The cap pops off, leaving little gouges in the wood. Her deft paws spin it back to eye level, not spilling a drop.
I nod. "Much obliged."
"Ah hate to see a lawbat in peril." She sweeps that hat off her ears. They sway, translucent in the midday sun, causing my heart to flutter like a bat's first flight. Smiling, she places the bottle at my lips.
I open my mouth with care. Cold floods my tongue, then sweetness. Effervesce prickles through my mouth. I lick my lips, then grin. "It's good."
She leans in closer, amused no doubt at my halfwitted reaction. An affectionate paw brushes my cheek. My wing thumbs curl around the bottle but she doesn't let go.
"Try some."
Her head shakes. "Bubbles tickle mah nose." Her pink nose twitches.
I raise my ears and eyebrows. We let time hang a moment.
She relents, releasing her grasp.
I lift the bottle to her lips. The chill of glass stands in sharp contrast with the heat in her fur. The moment can't last, I know; the bottle will empty and she will be gone. Yet, as she takes a tentative swallow, those paws gentle on my wings, none of that matters.
A bead of sarsaparilla runs down my wing thumb, cold as well water. The hare raises my fingers to her lips, licking them clean. "Not bad." She smiles.
My wings flush with heat. I wish I could blame the sun, or something in the drink, but I know the reason is slipping off my desk right now, straddling my lap.
"Ah keep showin' up like this, folk'll wonder if you're knockin' boots with a tall bunny fella."
"Not my fault you look the part."
"You sayin' you don't cotton to the way I look?" Her ears droop, their softness brushing my face.
I pretend my trousers aren't feeling a trifle confining. "Not at all, though you are a trifle manly."
Rising, squeezing my legs in hers, she plants a row of kisses up my muzzle. βSeems you need remindin' aβ just how manly I ainβt.β
Paws working with a gunslinger's speed, she undoes her vest. We both blush, heat running through my whole body, save where Iβm gripping the bottle. I set it down.
Reaching up, my wings explore her fur. Sandstone gives way to alabaster, sunlight blooming behind her. My world runs awash in pink and whites, sunlight streaming through her rose quartz ears like the heavens parting. She sighs, my breath is stolen, and I lose myself in them; those endlessly complex veins dragging me down, down, down, past the curve of her breasts to the slope of her hips as my wings trace up under the vest along her naked back.
As we get to kissing, I wonder how Iβd ever thought the day was hot before now.
A little Valentine surprise for you folks. Hope you liked it.
>>Sixes Wild is now a complete action-romance novel from Sofawolf Press! https://www.sofawolf.com/products/s.....nifest-destiny
Editing by: Vendetta & SillyNeko345
Art consultation: Azry
Art by:
Yuki-chi
-Tempo
This here yarn winds in more 'an one piece. Point that pretty little mouse here to find the rest: <<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
If you enjoyed this story, please comment.
This is not my art.
by Tempe O'Kun
Sheriff Jordan Blake gets a surprise visit from a bunny outlaw.
My thief breezes into the office.
Silver pistol at each hip, the hare stands before my desk. A long coat sways in the hot breeze, dust trailing off like a vapor. That smoky muzzle gleams a smile under stormy eyes.
A quick paw locks the door. The bunny's boots ring on the floorboards. "Howdy, lawbat."
"Six..." A pen drops from my hind paw, staining the cuff of my trousers and making a Dalmatian of the document. I jump up, but not in time to save them. "Aw, heck!"
"That's a fine way to greet a lady." A touch out of breath, she tilts my muzzle up into a kiss. The ghost of a cigarette haunts her lips.
Warmth floods my wings. The ink-stained pants and the intervening time since our last kiss vanish from my concern, leaving only the bunny standing over me. The kiss ends in a little rub of noses. "So you're a lady now?"
"Much as ah've ever been." Her muzzle aligns on mine like a compass needle. I wish that compass didn't lead her so far afield between kisses.
"Who're you running from now?"
"Nobody with fair odds a' catchin' me."
"Fair odds and you don't run together." My wings trace around her hips, finding that fluff of a tail.
Her caress falls on my wings like Arizona rain. "Never hear you complain when they're in your favor."
We kiss again. Sunlight spills in around us, discernible even when I close my eyes, just like the bunny in my wings. Our muzzles slide along each other until our foreheads touch. The window's dusty and the door's locked; in this rare moment I'm alone with her.
"You could always stay." Whispering, I smile, a trifle unsteady.
"You could always go." Her paw grazes my badge.
Not wanting to dwell on impossibilities, I rise into another kiss, letting my tongue trail along her lips.
She giggles, backing off just a little. "Ease off there, sugarwings. Yer kissin' is a mite distractin'."
"Reckoned that's the point." I kiss the corner of her smile.
"You can distract me in a moment's time. Right now I got a little something for you." Her long coat slips down those elegant arms, showing the delicate shades of her fur. She withdraws something from a pocket, then drops the coat to the floor in a heap. A parcel sits in her grasp, brown paper blending with the shades of her fur.
My ears flatten. "Something you stole?"
"Bought--" She tilts the paper-wrapped object. "I know you're all particular."
"Bought with stolen funds."
Her claws scritch under my chin, her voice losing its edge and most of its smoke. Her ears go down. "Ya want what I got or not?"
Helpless against her bunny charms, my wing thumbs trace the curve of her back.
She kisses me down into my chair, handing me the gift.
Touching it strikes my wings like electricity. "It's cold!"
"That it is, lawbat."
I laugh, holding it gingerly. Seems today comes full of surprises. "You come across an icebox out in the desert?"
"You don't expect a bunny to go tellin' you all her secrets, do ya?"
I slip the parcel paper off it, finding it to be a bottle marked with exotic glyphs and symbols.
"Some manner a' Oriental sarsaparilla. Seein' as you're so keen on fruit."
I turn the jade glass bottle over and try to twist off the cap. "Sarsaparilla's not a-- Wait, how'd you come to know what it says?"
Pushing aside the papers, she sits on my desk. "Got it from an otter chemist in California."
"And you take his word on that?" I struggle at opening it with my wings, since reaching up with hind paw would be uncouth.
"Gave him cause to tell me the truth." Her powerful legs cross before me. "Try it. I don't reckon it's even liquor. Least I think that's what he said. Talked a mite funny."
"You --huuh!-- inspire nothing but confidence, madam." I wrestle with the cap.
She snatches the bottle from my wings and raps it hard against the edge of my desk. The cap pops off, leaving little gouges in the wood. Her deft paws spin it back to eye level, not spilling a drop.
I nod. "Much obliged."
"Ah hate to see a lawbat in peril." She sweeps that hat off her ears. They sway, translucent in the midday sun, causing my heart to flutter like a bat's first flight. Smiling, she places the bottle at my lips.
I open my mouth with care. Cold floods my tongue, then sweetness. Effervesce prickles through my mouth. I lick my lips, then grin. "It's good."
She leans in closer, amused no doubt at my halfwitted reaction. An affectionate paw brushes my cheek. My wing thumbs curl around the bottle but she doesn't let go.
"Try some."
Her head shakes. "Bubbles tickle mah nose." Her pink nose twitches.
I raise my ears and eyebrows. We let time hang a moment.
She relents, releasing her grasp.
I lift the bottle to her lips. The chill of glass stands in sharp contrast with the heat in her fur. The moment can't last, I know; the bottle will empty and she will be gone. Yet, as she takes a tentative swallow, those paws gentle on my wings, none of that matters.
A bead of sarsaparilla runs down my wing thumb, cold as well water. The hare raises my fingers to her lips, licking them clean. "Not bad." She smiles.
My wings flush with heat. I wish I could blame the sun, or something in the drink, but I know the reason is slipping off my desk right now, straddling my lap.
"Ah keep showin' up like this, folk'll wonder if you're knockin' boots with a tall bunny fella."
"Not my fault you look the part."
"You sayin' you don't cotton to the way I look?" Her ears droop, their softness brushing my face.
I pretend my trousers aren't feeling a trifle confining. "Not at all, though you are a trifle manly."
Rising, squeezing my legs in hers, she plants a row of kisses up my muzzle. βSeems you need remindin' aβ just how manly I ainβt.β
Paws working with a gunslinger's speed, she undoes her vest. We both blush, heat running through my whole body, save where Iβm gripping the bottle. I set it down.
Reaching up, my wings explore her fur. Sandstone gives way to alabaster, sunlight blooming behind her. My world runs awash in pink and whites, sunlight streaming through her rose quartz ears like the heavens parting. She sighs, my breath is stolen, and I lose myself in them; those endlessly complex veins dragging me down, down, down, past the curve of her breasts to the slope of her hips as my wings trace up under the vest along her naked back.
As we get to kissing, I wonder how Iβd ever thought the day was hot before now.
A little Valentine surprise for you folks. Hope you liked it.
>>Sixes Wild is now a complete action-romance novel from Sofawolf Press! https://www.sofawolf.com/products/s.....nifest-destiny
Editing by: Vendetta & SillyNeko345
Art consultation: Azry
Art by:
Yuki-chi-Tempo
This here yarn winds in more 'an one piece. Point that pretty little mouse here to find the rest: <<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
If you enjoyed this story, please comment.
This is not my art.
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I'd forgotten to post the link to more when I first posted this. X)
I'd forgotten to post the link to more when I first posted this. X)
good, good, but one thing about your German. Geschichten is a "Present Perfect Tense" word, and they belong end of the sentence. " Langere habt sind in Produktion Geschichten." Don't ask me why... crazy Germans.
Still great short story, MUCH better then the New story I'm writing.
Still great short story, MUCH better then the New story I'm writing.
A nice cute story with very likable characters, for a moment I expected the bottle to be an early coca-cola, but it wasn't to be.
And considering the size of towns in the old west, I guess the lawbat already has a reputation of taking tall bunny fellows for "private interrogation" in his office; I guess it's a very open minded town, but it's something those how don't like the lawbat could use to remove him from office.
Congratulations on another excellent little moment in the life of your characters.
And considering the size of towns in the old west, I guess the lawbat already has a reputation of taking tall bunny fellows for "private interrogation" in his office; I guess it's a very open minded town, but it's something those how don't like the lawbat could use to remove him from office.
Congratulations on another excellent little moment in the life of your characters.
Hmmm. They had Coca-Cola in the 1890s, though it wasn't sold in bottles until 1894. This bottle says "Zaza" however, which Yuki invented because it sounded nice.
That's a good point, though Six is usually careful to sneak into his place in the dark of night. This issue is probably going to feature in future stories, or even in the second Sixes novel...
That's a good point, though Six is usually careful to sneak into his place in the dark of night. This issue is probably going to feature in future stories, or even in the second Sixes novel...
I don't know the characters and im not familiar with the plot. But I love it and I really gotta read the other chapters as well.
Again, your western-slang is just priceless. "knockin' boots with a tall bunny fella." Did you come up with that one yourself?
Of course, the dialogs are smart and witty, the chapter is very well written and the scenario is perfectly described, and I like how you kinda balance the story between the deep abyss of romantic cliches and decent, realistic character development, in a way that I'm sure is intentional. It gives the story a certain charm. :)
Again, your western-slang is just priceless. "knockin' boots with a tall bunny fella." Did you come up with that one yourself?
Of course, the dialogs are smart and witty, the chapter is very well written and the scenario is perfectly described, and I like how you kinda balance the story between the deep abyss of romantic cliches and decent, realistic character development, in a way that I'm sure is intentional. It gives the story a certain charm. :)
I'm proud that you were able to get a feel for the characters and get intrigued because of just this chapter. I guess I'm doing something right with these promo stories.
"Knocking boots" with someone is an actual cowboy euphemism for sex-- I didn't even invent it! :D
Writing dialog for Six and Blake is always fun, given how differently they speak and think from each other, especially for Six since she has a rather outlandish accent. Likewise, they are interesting to develop as characters, since they're both going from untrusting to trusting, alone to together, even though the paths they take are very different.
I debating having this story continue on into a sex scene, but it didn't really seem to need it. Besides, it's always good to have another basically work-safe story to draw in new readers. ;)
"Knocking boots" with someone is an actual cowboy euphemism for sex-- I didn't even invent it! :D
Writing dialog for Six and Blake is always fun, given how differently they speak and think from each other, especially for Six since she has a rather outlandish accent. Likewise, they are interesting to develop as characters, since they're both going from untrusting to trusting, alone to together, even though the paths they take are very different.
I debating having this story continue on into a sex scene, but it didn't really seem to need it. Besides, it's always good to have another basically work-safe story to draw in new readers. ;)
I realize I'm a bit late to the party, but I just had to comment on how excellent of a story this is turning out to be. I've read great stories, and I've read mediocre, but one thing defines a great story in MY mind. When I imagine particular actors' voices in my mind, while reading the characters' lines, that's the biggest sign of a captivating tale. And in this case, for the sheriff, I imagine a voice similar to John Wayne, though just a bit less rough, and with just a touch of a southern/Texas accent. And while I DO imagine a voice for the bunny, as well, I'm not quite sure how to describe who she "sounds like" to me. Will definitely look into your novel, though!
Oh no! Seems I'm late to the party of answering your question! X) Thank you so much for your kind words. I am honored that people enjoy my work this much.
As for their voices, I was thinking along similar lines. When I did public readings of the novel, I read Blake as a well-educated man who'd been out West just long enough for some of the accent to creep in. I also read him as a little deeper than I'd originally thought, just to differentiate him from Six. She, by contrast, has a splash of Southern accent on her Western dialog. (A crazy amount of period research actually went into her voice!) When I read her lines, I tried to make her feminine, but a little rough, to make it believable that she'd be confused for a male.
I do hope you check out the novel! :) I've already got some ideas for a sequel...
As for their voices, I was thinking along similar lines. When I did public readings of the novel, I read Blake as a well-educated man who'd been out West just long enough for some of the accent to creep in. I also read him as a little deeper than I'd originally thought, just to differentiate him from Six. She, by contrast, has a splash of Southern accent on her Western dialog. (A crazy amount of period research actually went into her voice!) When I read her lines, I tried to make her feminine, but a little rough, to make it believable that she'd be confused for a male.
I do hope you check out the novel! :) I've already got some ideas for a sequel...
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