If you drew a bee/butterfly on your nose, it'll look less werid.

Yeah, the position of the eyes is a bit off. Heres something that should help: If one of the eyes is at the left side of the socket, then the other eye should be at the left side of the socket. So both eyes should be at the left side of the socket when looking this way.

For your style, I would suggest moving the outside eye a few cms to the right, so there middle of the eye, the pupil, will be where the eyelashes start.

oh yeah i do look cross eyed XD i didnt notice that
afew cms to the right? this is only an a4 page XD afew cm is how big the eye is its self XD but yeah i see what you mean.

Perhaps not a few cms... mms perhaps. But basically, where your top eyelashes start, thats where I would put the middle of your eye.

yeah i see she is lightly cross eyes thats still not my main problem. its the structure of the eye i cant get right like the oval n how it goes to the nose etc

Are you a fan of red-lines?

red lines?

When an artist takes another artist's image and draws over it with what they think is correct anatomy or whatever. The original artist can then see their mistakes and how they can be fixed. Usually done with red, thus the term 'red-lines.'

Here: http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f.....okeRelines.jpg

I'm no master at drawing, but I had a go at the eyes.
Also, I changed the nose a bit - lions and most big cats have long wide noses.
I suggest looking up lots of pictures of people and cat faces and having at go at drawing them. Even if realism isn't a style that you want to pursue, practice makes perfect, and it will defiantly help your cartoon style :D

well thanks for the tips. n yeah you are welcome to red-line my work any time :3
and yes practice does make perfect i have improved alot since a year ago so i get told but i know i got alot to improve one :3