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trilbygrey
I'm not entirely happy with this piece...I feel like I'm missing something...Trilby, if this poem doesn't suit you or if there is more you would like in it, please let me know.
trilbygreyI'm not entirely happy with this piece...I feel like I'm missing something...Trilby, if this poem doesn't suit you or if there is more you would like in it, please let me know.
Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 347 B
It casts a grand stage ready for a concerto of grandeur.
Seems as if one would start speaking it slowly then quicken one's pace, working oneself into a frantic spiral.
A good piece indeed, though it does feel as if there is but a mere fragment missing somewhere
like a gemstone missing but one simple grain that would make it whole.
Keep up the good work, I'm sure this piece will be greater than you image!
AnthonyM~
Seems as if one would start speaking it slowly then quicken one's pace, working oneself into a frantic spiral.
A good piece indeed, though it does feel as if there is but a mere fragment missing somewhere
like a gemstone missing but one simple grain that would make it whole.
Keep up the good work, I'm sure this piece will be greater than you image!
AnthonyM~
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