I couldn´t sleep well last night, so I thought, I could as well continue to work on my comic. Here we have page 50.
Voolvif Monn: *There is no cover here anymore. It is a risk, but I have no other choice. - Feast your eyes upon the horizon. Be blind for everything arround you!*
Clone1: We mustn´t let the plain out of our sight. If he has survived, he has to cross it.
Clone2: Yes. We must stay focused.
Clone1: Why have we done this to him?
Clone2: I.... don´t know...
Voolvif Monn: *There is no cover here anymore. It is a risk, but I have no other choice. - Feast your eyes upon the horizon. Be blind for everything arround you!*
Clone1: We mustn´t let the plain out of our sight. If he has survived, he has to cross it.
Clone2: Yes. We must stay focused.
Clone1: Why have we done this to him?
Clone2: I.... don´t know...
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I am unaware of the process of the "Order 66" due to my lack of interest in Star Wars. And I do not wish to look into it for now because it allows me to be kept in the dark on the events transpiring at the moment. At first glance, it seems it's some sort of organised mass-assassination of forces of influence against an authority.
Rhetorical questions : why are the clones confused about their actions ? Does the "Order 66" allow control or influence over someone else's actions and mind ? I'll gladly learn the answers through your comic (if it does answer them).
Rhetorical questions : why are the clones confused about their actions ? Does the "Order 66" allow control or influence over someone else's actions and mind ? I'll gladly learn the answers through your comic (if it does answer them).
This is a little difficult, because my story is in fact just a little side scenario, rooting in the events of the movie "Star Wars Episode 3 - The revenge of the Sith".
Knowing at least the basic infos about the plot could make understanding the hows and whys in my story a little bit easier. But you can choose to just follow my comic here.
So I would like to ask: Is the story itself clear enough, so that you can follow it, even not knowing the lore of Star Wars?
Knowing at least the basic infos about the plot could make understanding the hows and whys in my story a little bit easier. But you can choose to just follow my comic here.
So I would like to ask: Is the story itself clear enough, so that you can follow it, even not knowing the lore of Star Wars?
I could and I have done this before, but there are two reasons, why I am doing it that way:
1. It just takes too much time for me to edit the comic pages to fill in the dialogues in two different versions.
2. My English is simply not good enough to be presented on comic pages, where each grammar error shines out like a red alert lamp. Putting them into the description makes them less striking.
1. It just takes too much time for me to edit the comic pages to fill in the dialogues in two different versions.
2. My English is simply not good enough to be presented on comic pages, where each grammar error shines out like a red alert lamp. Putting them into the description makes them less striking.
Another good demonstration of Voolvif's mastery of Force techniques, utilising the Mind Trick here, though perhaps a good thing again that the Clones state of mind meant he didn't have to exert himself too much.
Also looks like Voolvif will have some questions to consider, the Clones themselves not knowing why they turned on him and his visions just before they did, that another clue that they didn't want to do it, a tragedy in this case with both himself and his pack as victims, though he'll have to keep moving, not allow himself to hesitate given that there is no cover here.
Also looks like Voolvif will have some questions to consider, the Clones themselves not knowing why they turned on him and his visions just before they did, that another clue that they didn't want to do it, a tragedy in this case with both himself and his pack as victims, though he'll have to keep moving, not allow himself to hesitate given that there is no cover here.
Thanks. The time I need to do one page depends on how detailed it is. For this page above I spnet about three hours for the entire process
For the time being, this must be enough^^;
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/45558057/
For the time being, this must be enough^^;
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/45558057/
Thanks. I thought, it would be interesting, if some clones would have developed a sense of unity far beyond the simple hierarchy of military towards their leader. I allways was of the oppinion: The better a Jedi treated their clones and the more they felt united, the more the clones would have developed independend ways of thinking beyond their programming, thus leading them to question their orders.
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