I was struck with inspiration!
Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 632 B
Very nice. I especially love the first stanza; it is more unstructured and abstract than the others, giving it a lot of power. I wonder if, since the last stanza is an answer rather than a question, if the last line of that stanza might have more impact if formed as a statement rather than an imperative... "Life is love, for it is sacred." for example.
Overall, a very nice piece. I enjoyed it a lot.
Overall, a very nice piece. I enjoyed it a lot.
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