This is an essay that I just finished up. I wanted to post it on my main account so I can get some feedback concerning the writing before putting it on the
Libertarian_Furs page. So... GIVE ME FEEDBACK OM NOM NOM.
Edit: I also know that this isn't really in depth, concerning the issues I'm talking about here. I just wanted to make a general point with it, so I only gave minimal--yet I feel it effective--insight.
Libertarian_Furs page. So... GIVE ME FEEDBACK OM NOM NOM. Edit: I also know that this isn't really in depth, concerning the issues I'm talking about here. I just wanted to make a general point with it, so I only gave minimal--yet I feel it effective--insight.
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"It them say, 'Hey, there isn’t a problem with minorities being able to take out loans. Just look at the statistics!'"
I think that's supposed to read "It let them say..."
Also, a bibliography would be wonderful. I'd like to see where you get figures like $3 trillion spent on a certain program or programs, among other info you mention in this essay. It's a good informative essay, but I personally would prefer reading something that was argumentative as well--something that not only raises awareness of the problems that you mention, but also offers a solution on how we might remedy it.
I think that's supposed to read "It let them say..."
Also, a bibliography would be wonderful. I'd like to see where you get figures like $3 trillion spent on a certain program or programs, among other info you mention in this essay. It's a good informative essay, but I personally would prefer reading something that was argumentative as well--something that not only raises awareness of the problems that you mention, but also offers a solution on how we might remedy it.
Thanks for picking that out.
I need to fix the number for the wars in the middle east. It's really just over one-trillion.
http://www.drugsense.org/cms/wodclock
http://freestateproject.org/about/e.....nservatism.php
http://costofwar.com/en/
Thomas E. Woods Jr. Meltdown: How the Government Caused the Housing Bubble
These are the other sites and sources that I used, plus the actual cost of the mid-east wars.
I need to fix the number for the wars in the middle east. It's really just over one-trillion.
http://www.drugsense.org/cms/wodclock
http://freestateproject.org/about/e.....nservatism.php
http://costofwar.com/en/
Thomas E. Woods Jr. Meltdown: How the Government Caused the Housing Bubble
These are the other sites and sources that I used, plus the actual cost of the mid-east wars.
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