Hehee. Curious that the boss is a puffy one too. n..n

Oooh, now this is a fun yarn!

Don't know if there's enough ending material for a third one, but you've never failed to be creative before ^_^

Excellent work, dude!

Well, I'm glad SOMEONE likes it. I could probably make a third, but, I dunno. It's kinda demoralizing when you realize only one or two people like it . . .

Hogwash!

As a radio broadcaster, I know that all something needs to be more popular is better circulation.

You're a terrific writer, Keldor. The only problem is, your present audience is the more visually inclined, so they tend to look more than read.

Furthermore, this has only been up for a couple of days.

It's been viewed by almost a hundred FAers and been faved thrice.

Don't let your spirits get down.

Besides, regardless of all that other stuff, you're the artist! Write what comes to you. ^_^

Yeah, I hear what you are saying logically, but morale is a tricky thing. I just want to know that people appreciate my work, and when they don't or that I feel like they don't, it just gets me down and prevents me from writing. I know it sounds hokey and possibly self-deprecating, but it's like an autonomic process that I can't just shut off.

I am glad you like it though, and I'm grateful you gave it such a glowing review.

I definately agree with "better circulation." A lot of people make great works for the Internet, but they have little or no marketing skills.

As a writer, I have to agree that learning how to lure a target audience is the most important aspect! No one is going to read a book that no one knows exist.