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Not too bad, considering you just play a little bit with the stuff. Some recommendations:

If this is the Folly, bring up the ambient light a bit. Get their feet out of the deck plates. Work on making the poses a little more natural. Any artist has 10,000 bad pictures in them, start gettting them out. Make sure your shadows aren't completely black, use a grey color (if you can).

Good luck finding a good Chakat/Felitaur model for Poser/Daz - the existing ones are a little too Leonine, and have problems. I'd point you to the artist who did the Kryslin Quad model, but that requires $$$$ you probably don't have.

Steve

Agreed on the $ me no has! Also agreed on this be playing around with it without a clue. Another post complained about the eyes seeming too big, so when I was looking into that I found I might be able o give her rabbit ears too - so you may see a Stew in the future