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News of Carnoc's attack on his handlers reaches Chris, Dave and Sean, forcing them to reconsider their plans before making an attempt to break the dragon out.
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Whee, action! Finally! Though if I hadn't dropped the story, I would have significantly revised the second half of this chapter, as having Carnoc just fly home is really not feasible. I would have changed it, given the opportunity, to them getting a smuggler to drive him back home in an 18-wheeler.
Comments and critique greatly appreciated.
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Whee, action! Finally! Though if I hadn't dropped the story, I would have significantly revised the second half of this chapter, as having Carnoc just fly home is really not feasible. I would have changed it, given the opportunity, to them getting a smuggler to drive him back home in an 18-wheeler.
Comments and critique greatly appreciated.
Category Story / All
Species Western Dragon
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 32.9 kB
Listed in Folders
I can't take Carnoc seriously, he is 130 years old? Seriously? o.O He really acts like a hatchling and seeing 6.500 kilo winged-destruction with his head low like a kid thats about to get scolded by his father is kinda ridiculous XD
And the last sentence... well, I hope he leaves Sean alone. He helped him get out of that zoo and he wants to beat him? WTF. I know your dragons are no softies, but that's just mean. He even knows that he is not a real dragon.
And the last sentence... well, I hope he leaves Sean alone. He helped him get out of that zoo and he wants to beat him? WTF. I know your dragons are no softies, but that's just mean. He even knows that he is not a real dragon.
It happens when you never move out of your father's cave x3 though his age is the equivalent of a 25-26-year-old human. Plus he did something pretty bad, and he knows it.
Dragons do not like cowards, and Carnoc isn't the only one in the clan who feels that way. :P You'll see some disdain from most of the other dragons towards Sean as well, later on.
Dragons do not like cowards, and Carnoc isn't the only one in the clan who feels that way. :P You'll see some disdain from most of the other dragons towards Sean as well, later on.
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