I was hoping to get this one completed before the end of Feb but home circumstances prevented it. Managed to finish the main draft last night and polish it somewhat this morning.
Just another short story, nothing too exotic. More of an "Inbetween" prose I guess!
Feedback welcome :>
Just another short story, nothing too exotic. More of an "Inbetween" prose I guess!
Feedback welcome :>
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 118 x 120px
File Size 48.3 kB
A wonderful read! REALLY liked the way the PTSD has seeped into her. Makes it hit properly what she endured. Also the bit of a sting (for lack of a better word) She seems to feel when against the Major was a nice touch and its pleasing to see that he and the colonel having the mind set they have. Its quite refreshing! And finally, that bit with her chest was just *chef's kiss* OwO
You're doing incredible work and I greatly want to see more!!
You're doing incredible work and I greatly want to see more!!
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