I really like the first panel X3 and I fixed Dark's facial expression in the last panel as I was going over the lineart in photoshop. it looks better.

Also, the planet Ashe has three moons, the moon Draco only appears once a month at random every two years, the red moon is called Hell and the other is called Yuela (pronounce Yu-eh-la).

and Galleta ate the fish as a sort of revenge against the people that hurted Dark.

a few mistake with Galleta's markings. blargh XP