Made a commission for
mrpatapon featuring the FFC characters of
daigaijin in a wrestling story in the human world.
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Muko and her friends are absorbed into a portal after ten years of furry fighting. The trio ends up in the human world in Japan, where they have to start from scratch. Despite the new planet, the trio is ready to begin a legend in this new world.
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FFC characters belong to
daigaijin
Zeo belongs to
brettico170
Human characters belong to
mrpatapon
Story written by
XXXPaws
mrpatapon featuring the FFC characters of
daigaijin in a wrestling story in the human world.----
Muko and her friends are absorbed into a portal after ten years of furry fighting. The trio ends up in the human world in Japan, where they have to start from scratch. Despite the new planet, the trio is ready to begin a legend in this new world.
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FFC characters belong to
daigaijinZeo belongs to
brettico170Human characters belong to
mrpataponStory written by
XXXPaws
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 54.9 kB
Listed in Folders
The best part of this story is how well you manage to portray each of the characters. It's almost as if you know these characters better than all of us.
Muko is a ditz but she's not braindead stupid
Kalita is kind of a b*tch but not in a way that makes her unlikable
Cookie is greedy but in a way that's relatable and sympathetic
Zeo is a scoundrel but also gentleman and scholar
You did an excellent job in bringing all my human characters to life and giving them more personality than I have thought of. I feel flattered whenever you compare my Damien and Dale with Donkizari and other legendary combagals. Also like how you've written Cassandra in the story and develop her relationship with Cookie and Zeo. I also really like how you manage to translate the fight between Muko and Kalita vs. Tiger Kitty and Hit-Girl from the video gameplay to the narrative text.
Overall you manage to give me what I wanted from this story and imagine a whole new world just from a few guidelines and video game screenshots for Muko and her friends to have adventures in. Excelent work!!
Muko is a ditz but she's not braindead stupid
Kalita is kind of a b*tch but not in a way that makes her unlikable
Cookie is greedy but in a way that's relatable and sympathetic
Zeo is a scoundrel but also gentleman and scholar
You did an excellent job in bringing all my human characters to life and giving them more personality than I have thought of. I feel flattered whenever you compare my Damien and Dale with Donkizari and other legendary combagals. Also like how you've written Cassandra in the story and develop her relationship with Cookie and Zeo. I also really like how you manage to translate the fight between Muko and Kalita vs. Tiger Kitty and Hit-Girl from the video gameplay to the narrative text.
Overall you manage to give me what I wanted from this story and imagine a whole new world just from a few guidelines and video game screenshots for Muko and her friends to have adventures in. Excelent work!!
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