Yeah I think you do a very good splinter ;) will there be any more? what's changing? mmmm

I literally got goosebumps while reading this. O_O Poor Splinter... and poor turtles!! They're going to come back from patrol to find their father/sensei dead. (I'm assuming he had a heart attack at the very end)

Very nicely written! ^_^

I'm a one-shot wonder, so there won't be a continuation.

And yes, you're right Megan. *Scratches the kitty behind the ear*

Thanks guys!

Uhm... wow! Incredibly powerful for such a short piece. It was exactly as long as it needed to be. You have a gift for phrases with powerful visual and emotional impact. Without knowing it had any reference to TMNT, this would still be a great piece of art.

Wow- thank you so much for your kind words!

I'm 100% with Uncle Oakie... Excellent, excellent work.. Seriously and truly moving. Being a fan of TMNT, and being really fond of Splinter, I'm sitting here all sniffly, wondering how the boys will react...

A++