This is drawn by  Babyfurbobcat who has no self esteem in his art. Help him out here? This looks really good for someone of his skill level IMO, but I apparently "Don't know what I"m talking about" so he says.

Someone who DOES know what they're "talking about", give your opinion on this please.

It's a WIP that he gave up on, because he doesn't listen or follow my advice.