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It took me a while to think of a proper scenario to end the book in. Of course, I wanted to, explain about Wesley's grandad, but how and where was ... difficult to decide until the image of him and the grandmaster sipping tea just wouldn't leave my mind.
And then, I couldn't think of a proper ending line. SO FRUSTRATING. I'll think of something better later. *sigh*
So ends the tale of Wesley Drayke. ... no not really. I'm definitely taking a break from it for a while, but I'll start it up again eventually with the introduction of Richard Foxx. *grins and chortles happily* The story I've been wanting to get on with.
And then, I couldn't think of a proper ending line. SO FRUSTRATING. I'll think of something better later. *sigh*
So ends the tale of Wesley Drayke. ... no not really. I'm definitely taking a break from it for a while, but I'll start it up again eventually with the introduction of Richard Foxx. *grins and chortles happily* The story I've been wanting to get on with.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 9.1 kB
this was cool..only a few things i would like to comment on.
its just a little confusing at the first part i thought for a bit that the hyenas have destoried another city and wes was chaseing them. also just a few parts were confusing to read but i think it was just you getting excited about writing it you forgot a few periods and such. or maybe i just stupid xP
its just a little confusing at the first part i thought for a bit that the hyenas have destoried another city and wes was chaseing them. also just a few parts were confusing to read but i think it was just you getting excited about writing it you forgot a few periods and such. or maybe i just stupid xP
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