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This is my latest commission, this one for 
Minhande. He requested Zee experimenting with a long-range means of testing his powers, and I figured why not; let's add to the inflator's arsenal! Of course, the situation kind of comes at an appropriate time; the cops are onto me. D:
Read on and find out more!
Minh is © to Minhande
Xelax is © to
Draylenlearth (thanks for letting me borrow him!)
Minhande. He requested Zee experimenting with a long-range means of testing his powers, and I figured why not; let's add to the inflator's arsenal! Of course, the situation kind of comes at an appropriate time; the cops are onto me. D:Read on and find out more!
Minh is © to
MinhandeXelax is © to
Draylenlearth (thanks for letting me borrow him!)
Category Story / Inflation
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 66.7 kB
An amusing story like I like them from you, dude(-^.=.^-)
The idea with the coin was really interesting and I got surprised about how the situation between Zee and the police is I would have thought that they would force him to talk about all the earlier incidents in the city. At least he was the suspect in all cases.
Minh was really somekind of a bad victim. I felt very sorry for him because it was like a day with so much mishappenings. I just hope he really didn't destruct his house in the end.
My fav scene in this one was when he arrived at the bus stop and accidently pushed the bullying bear through the glas, hehe. I loved the imagined pic of the much smaller Eevee looking surprised about what he did there.
Oh, the end was somekind funny but confusing to me. Before I read this story I thought Zee was like a phantom in the city and just nearly spotted sometimes by one of the fans in the internet forums or by a TV camera accidently. But that the police know him already and all that about testimonies and even personal data storage happened already so that they are able to call him via phone surprised me.
But one thing I have to predict. I think Zee won't like to use the coin for very long and the police won't just end to think him as a propably deöinquent in upcoming inflation incidents, hehe.
I'm looking forward to the next happening, dude!*thumbsup*(~.=.o)
The idea with the coin was really interesting and I got surprised about how the situation between Zee and the police is I would have thought that they would force him to talk about all the earlier incidents in the city. At least he was the suspect in all cases.
Minh was really somekind of a bad victim. I felt very sorry for him because it was like a day with so much mishappenings. I just hope he really didn't destruct his house in the end.
My fav scene in this one was when he arrived at the bus stop and accidently pushed the bullying bear through the glas, hehe. I loved the imagined pic of the much smaller Eevee looking surprised about what he did there.
Oh, the end was somekind funny but confusing to me. Before I read this story I thought Zee was like a phantom in the city and just nearly spotted sometimes by one of the fans in the internet forums or by a TV camera accidently. But that the police know him already and all that about testimonies and even personal data storage happened already so that they are able to call him via phone surprised me.
But one thing I have to predict. I think Zee won't like to use the coin for very long and the police won't just end to think him as a propably deöinquent in upcoming inflation incidents, hehe.
I'm looking forward to the next happening, dude!*thumbsup*(~.=.o)
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