Page 2 of the Duncan Gets Stuck™ series
Getting stuck in a floatie after a failed stunt, Duncan's fate now lies entirely in the fingers of his trainer. He could only hope that his girlfriend and sister take pity on him instead of joining in on the fun (That’s page 3)
A commission for
DecoyBuizel, extrememly thankful for letting me be a part of the comic
Each and every page of the Duncan Gets Stuck™ series is done by a different artist, page 1 is done by the talented
Hake-Feretto, find his part here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/50762990/
Getting stuck in a floatie after a failed stunt, Duncan's fate now lies entirely in the fingers of his trainer. He could only hope that his girlfriend and sister take pity on him instead of joining in on the fun (That’s page 3)
A commission for
DecoyBuizel, extrememly thankful for letting me be a part of the comicEach and every page of the Duncan Gets Stuck™ series is done by a different artist, page 1 is done by the talented
Hake-Feretto, find his part here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/50762990/
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Pokemon
Size 1596 x 2308px
File Size 1.05 MB
It's a real pleasure to was the one intriducing the project , work with so talented peoples was realy a great experience ~~
Well Dolly, I knlw I already told you about it but your part make the project even more fun, you did a fantastic job on every pannel ^w^ !! Everything is here like in mine, fun, tease, embarassment and gag hehe Everything peeerfect !!
I'm out of comics for a while now but maybe in futur we'll have occasion to work on a similar project again ! Still sorry to have take so long for my part >÷<... I'm happy you can finaly get out you ^w^ !!!
Well Dolly, I knlw I already told you about it but your part make the project even more fun, you did a fantastic job on every pannel ^w^ !! Everything is here like in mine, fun, tease, embarassment and gag hehe Everything peeerfect !!
I'm out of comics for a while now but maybe in futur we'll have occasion to work on a similar project again ! Still sorry to have take so long for my part >÷<... I'm happy you can finaly get out you ^w^ !!!
Oh, Dolly!
Man, I wasn't expecting you to take up the reigns for the next page, but man, it makes for such a unique and interesting idea.
You and Hake really pulled this off nicely, and I'm actually happy this had came to fruition.
I'm really noticing alot of smaller details on yours, like the Psyduck float actually looking quite shocked. Honestly, I couldn't help but grin at that.
And if there's once thing I know you're best at, its making your art style distinct, and its really unlike anything anyone else has seen. Every panel has its own vibe, and I really think that should be appreciated more often.
Buut, it gives me a hard time since, I don't even know where to start.. xP
Can't say I don't find my ways around the problem though..
Y'know, you really do Pokemon well, especially Buizels. The wide frown on Duncan's face as he tries his best to paddle away is really nice looking, and the 'lil motion lines sowing up as he paddles his feet about I can appreciate. ^^
Also, the shock on his face in that lil' scene in the first panel is unmistakably great. :3
Gonna take a page from Dakota and real quickly praise the 2nd panel.
You nailed that 2nd panel. Those feet suspended in air as Duncan helplessly shields his pads from any kind of torment to em' just looks fantastic, and a detail I'm really happy to see added in.
The toe curls along with the expression of disbelief and straight shock never fail to get me~
(Also, just a sliight nod to that "Mm.. Veery convincing.." line being in the shape of a lily-pad. Dunno if that was intentional, but I still love it either way.. x3)
3rd frame's got a really nice Duncan expression, and the 4th- Gyaaa-
I just- You really managed to take some inspiration from me for the paws, and adapt it into your own cute way, no matter what frame or piece we're talking about. And here is no different. The toe curling and splaying along with the shape really just look great, and that continues with the other few frames. The finger drag along those soles look just fantastic, and the tail being used as a brush is also done so well~
The way the last two frames are set up just look fantastic, having his sister and girlfriend take two sides as the tickling frames sit above those, and, from there, you've got the gorgeous frame in-between those two.
I like to think that since these two things are surrounding the frame in the middle, its kinda the two things Duncan's occupied thinking about.
As usual, you hit it out of the park with the expressions here, and the big "HELP!!" text is a nice touch, along with the rapid waves along the water, and- Gosh that Bui face..~
Nevertheless, you did an amazing job on the 2nd page, and honestly, you and Hake have me really excited for the 3rd page coming up soon. And of course, I won't forget to be around for it.
Amazing work as always. :3
Man, I wasn't expecting you to take up the reigns for the next page, but man, it makes for such a unique and interesting idea.
You and Hake really pulled this off nicely, and I'm actually happy this had came to fruition.
I'm really noticing alot of smaller details on yours, like the Psyduck float actually looking quite shocked. Honestly, I couldn't help but grin at that.
And if there's once thing I know you're best at, its making your art style distinct, and its really unlike anything anyone else has seen. Every panel has its own vibe, and I really think that should be appreciated more often.
Buut, it gives me a hard time since, I don't even know where to start.. xP
Can't say I don't find my ways around the problem though..
Y'know, you really do Pokemon well, especially Buizels. The wide frown on Duncan's face as he tries his best to paddle away is really nice looking, and the 'lil motion lines sowing up as he paddles his feet about I can appreciate. ^^
Also, the shock on his face in that lil' scene in the first panel is unmistakably great. :3
Gonna take a page from Dakota and real quickly praise the 2nd panel.
You nailed that 2nd panel. Those feet suspended in air as Duncan helplessly shields his pads from any kind of torment to em' just looks fantastic, and a detail I'm really happy to see added in.
The toe curls along with the expression of disbelief and straight shock never fail to get me~
(Also, just a sliight nod to that "Mm.. Veery convincing.." line being in the shape of a lily-pad. Dunno if that was intentional, but I still love it either way.. x3)
3rd frame's got a really nice Duncan expression, and the 4th- Gyaaa-
I just- You really managed to take some inspiration from me for the paws, and adapt it into your own cute way, no matter what frame or piece we're talking about. And here is no different. The toe curling and splaying along with the shape really just look great, and that continues with the other few frames. The finger drag along those soles look just fantastic, and the tail being used as a brush is also done so well~
The way the last two frames are set up just look fantastic, having his sister and girlfriend take two sides as the tickling frames sit above those, and, from there, you've got the gorgeous frame in-between those two.
I like to think that since these two things are surrounding the frame in the middle, its kinda the two things Duncan's occupied thinking about.
As usual, you hit it out of the park with the expressions here, and the big "HELP!!" text is a nice touch, along with the rapid waves along the water, and- Gosh that Bui face..~
Nevertheless, you did an amazing job on the 2nd page, and honestly, you and Hake have me really excited for the 3rd page coming up soon. And of course, I won't forget to be around for it.
Amazing work as always. :3
I have said it before and you even agreed with me, you are amazing. Not just because of the seaming ease with which you draw even complicated scenarios but also the little details you leave for the viewer to find, the humor you inject and the respect you have for the characters. I was flattered when you liked the story so much and took such an interest in the project. It was fun seeing it come to life before my eyes. Thank you. And no, I did not pay EchoAmethyst to write that most technical evaluation of your work. But you know what, I totally agree.
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