Super adorable work you've done on this here =D

Haaaaw thanks Marqui~~ I'm happy you appreciate it buddy X3 !! It's one of my biggest challenge ever but I'm realy happy with the resukt, my actual face is the same than my curant avatar X3... 100% satisfate gehehe...

No problem at all and that's very good to hear =3

This looks wonderful! You did such a fantastic job with the art and comic-organization, buddy! :D

Heck, what a fun piece :>

Arigatooo gozaimasu U/\U ! I'm glad it pleas !

I love the smear frame and expressions, haha, you can feel all the action here ^^! Nice work Hake =3

Haaaaw arigato Tammer >w< !!! Realy ot was difficult to get everything good especialy the smear frame than I had absolutly no ideas to the way to do it for a while.

But my experiences and practice gave me enough skill for give it a try and what a result~~ I even impressed myself woth this for tell you !

Anyway thanks, I loooooved do each parts of this comic and tryed to give the best my curant skills allow-me and it payed hehe ^w^ !!

So I'm realy happy it pleas as much to the clients, than the communoty ^w^ !

Anyway thanks for tve kind words ~~

So cute cx niii

Haaaw arigato my brooo >w< ! I'm happy you like it ~~

incredibly done as always Hake, a great opening to a great comic!

Well thanks Dolly, I'm realy proud of the result myself ^w^ but I also want tvanks you flr the lastoment inspiration glad to your added characters in the first pannel in your part ;p ! Glad to that qi was able to make my own page more alive and full in tve end ^w^ !!!

Now lets see what the 3rd artist will do after us as poor Duncan is far to get all he desserve ):3....

A lovely opening page and looking forward to seeing the next part of the comic. Poor Duncan, I don't think he realises yet just what he's in for.

Gehehe thanks for the interest ^w^ I'm happy it pleas you and than this opening make you want to see tve second part than is now available on the second artist's page (added the link in top of description upper) . And yeah...he realy will GET IT X3....

Very great work Hake! Love the details, paws and action in this lovely comic! <3

Haaaw arigato Mile, it's realy rassuring to have other friends like the result ^w^ !!! Hope it wirthed the wait and yeah, all the actions was pretty fun to do here , hard but fun gehehe~~

And OF COURSE couldn't resist the syst's teasy-paws in Bg X3, her pose in Dolly's comic realy asked for it !! And now... she need to get it too one of these days gehehehe...

That spinning ripple splash of that tube dragging along the surface of the water looks incredible! That in addition to the smear frame, all the blur lines. It's woderfully dynamic, it's my favorite panel here!

Closely tied to the last one. With those Floatzel paws in frame~

Hoooo wow thanks my friend OwO I'm happy to get a coment from you >w< !!! Well yeah the spinning was realy my biggest challenge ever, I realy struggled at do it good especialy I had no any experience with Smear-framing stjff >÷<....

To be honest it's the part than was close to make me give up but glad to support I got I have no let it fall and just took a breack tile to colect enough skills and HOP I was finaly able to do it and...I realy loooved the result ^w^ !!!

I have Impress je myself on this one I must admit hehe and it was a realy good experience because I LOOOOOVE doing dynamic-stuff and this comic was the perfect occasion~~

Anyway thakks for the kidn words , it realy mean a lot for me ^w^ !!!! So pleased you like the draw as much than my clients !
I must admit~~

Oooh gosh!

Man Hake, this is really nice! Honestly, i'm impressed with this one! You don't see dynamic posing and shots like these everyday..
Also, big props to Lancess for the idea here, it certainly made for a really unique commission!

Onto your piece here, just looking at it told me, "Yeah, he really knows his dynamic posing..
First frame, or should I say frames really had alot going for them. You really didn't have to add the toe wiggles to one of those, but you did, and it looks great~ <3
The larger frames following it also look really great, with the dive being incredibly well done. The arms extending out and that confident expression are two details I can really appreciate. And then you've got Duncan forming his hands in the shape of a crosshair so he knows what he's aiming for, which is always nice..
Me personally..? What got me the most is that frame where he's send flying across the waves, which really threw me for a loop. Alright, firstly, I really can't imagine that scene there without that cartoony leg kicking sound.. And two, it just looks really nice in general. The blurred lines are really abundant here, and the large pool with Duncan really only taking up a small bit of it really plays out like a manga in my eyes. You've got the smearing on the face as well, since, dictating a shape is gonna be hard when he's spinning around like that, and the dynamic ripple effect on the water, with the "Splaaaaash!" text and how it gradually shrinks in size with the shot panning further is really well done!
After the cute "A few sliding later.." text up above, you've got the shot I really like here. Mostly due in part to those Floatzel paws on the background, which you still went through the trouble of detailing, and even while they're that far back, you can still see the wrinkles and the many details, which I love personally~

And of course, you've got Duncan, front and center, who's toootally not stuck.. >>
But, even with that up in the air, this looks great! You really know how to do your Pokemon characters Hake! Duncan looks really well done! I really like his face. The way you separated the eyes, and that blush taking up the space in-between those eyes. And the mouth looks really nice as well! Just the shape of the head looks great, and I feel like you did a great job on Duncan himself!
Also, pointing out the fainted Psyduck float cause, the guy needs more attention.. >w>
And, of course. those paws look really nice! Toe wiggles are just your thing, and you did it really nicely here, no doubts to show!

You really set the foundation for the rest of the pages to come, and that can't be underappreciated. Drawing this over just an idea usually requires the most work, since you gotta give your best to give it that appeal, and make sure it looks great. And I can confirm; you did a great job bringing this to life.
Great work here Hake, always happy to see ya' give it your best!

hello there and wow.. thanks for such a biiiiig review OwO !!! I need to answer it decently gehehe~~

First thanks dude ! i love dynamic stuff and to be honest i doidn't exepted someone will like it so much but here you came X3 !
so i'm realy pleased you appreciate my efford here, i realy did my best with my curant skills even if i still keep learn each days >x< !!!
Ho and the idea is indeed realy sweet X3 it all started from a little sketch and look at what we have now OwO... it's just amazing and
I'm honnored to be part of it !


Haaw thanks for the kind words >x< I 'll not said i'm so good at dynamic-posing but I'm happy the low i know about have grab your interest
so much ^^. Yeah wnated a max of Actions in this page so i tryed to found the good pose/composition for each , also the toes wiggling was
too much tempting here but glad it no ruin the draw hehe~~

Now it's true than I enjoyed make this hand-close-up for show how confident our Buizelk was here hehe ! The dive file was a challenge as i
neve rhad do this dynamic before, also wanted reproduce the Bg-lines effect you see often in pokemon the show, i hope i did it good enough
for it no ruin all >x< !

So about the flying accross the wave here was the most difficult action i had to do, i had no any experinece or practice with "smear frame" and
i entered in something full new to me here, i doubted so much to can do it good than it have put the comic in a hiatus for a long while....But finaly
after have kepe doing otehr draw i learned moire stuff and told me i was now able to do it good enough so.. I tryed !! i so hope it turned out great
at the full end, realy a hard scene but so teaching to me !!! I think smear-frame are indeed hard to "draw" as in cartoon they are often appear with
a noise everyone know X3.. not easy to reproduce this moove without animation but a bit of blurred/action-line here and here and hop here is the
result ;p !

Yeah for the pool and wave-actions i relay wanted do it like a manga-effect !! I inspired me a lot from water-running scee i can found in manga like
one piece, mashle, Black-clover, Naruto and plenty of otehr and i tryed to replicate it and my biggest inspiration is one punch-Man than have a lot
of details in, i tryed my best for adapt this in color ( what is realy hard >x< !!) and it seme i have succeed hehe~~ here too was a very good experience
to me ^w^ and the "splash" have add a bit of perspective than realy is what do the trick here and give the eel the draw is in movment !

Yeah the little "few sliding latter" was to give a time-reff than explain how he ended on the oteher side of the pool and the characters in Bg just
was a bonus i added at the full end XD... It made the last scene more "alive" and "full" and it was also a way to me to tease, the pose this floatzel have
in Dolly's page was too tempting so.. i did it Xd ! Ho yeah they are detailled just enough for it no take all the focus on the main "plan" than is Duncan
on his floater ^^. i lowed the oppacisty of the lineart of the floatzel and trainer but also Duncan's feet for give again a "perspective" effect than, i hope,
work good enough too UwU !

I'lm not used to do Bg so here was an otehr good experience than gave me some practice and tecahed me some skills, will be usefull for the next time
i'll do a Bg ^^.

Finaly yeah, Duncan be the main subject i needed to make him stand-out from the Bg so is why his lineart is more "large" for the viewer's eyes
can focus on him at first ! BG come after X3....

well relay a big thanks OwO I no often do pokemon but thy realy are fun to draw so i did the ebst i could here hehe and it pleased to my client !
blushy-embarassed face are my thing X3 i just LOOOOVE draw them, it's my fav part when i draw an expression ( i want my expression be the best
possible after teh feet of the character ! never rush a face, never ever UwU !)

So yeah it was a nice pokemon to draw and this psyduck face faintig is just than, like ine one piece, i wanted give a bit of "life" to the floater itself than
i did like an otehr character here than is forced to "stand" all the problem happening to Duncan X3.... and problems he have a lot... especialy in the 3rd
page you'll see soon~~

haaa.. the paws.. yeah definitivly an otehr fun thing I looove to do, when i draw i want absolutly do my Paws and face the best possible, plus... i love toes
wiggling and webbed-toes wiggling are even more adorable X3 !!! So I'm happy here again i have succeed this pat !!



So for conclude, yeah it was not easy to draw all this over an idea but I'm used to work with a min of details UwU fortunatly lanceness is pretty
good at description so i was able to build the comic pretty fast ! I had no do kit so good without his suggestions so i'm realy happy to have succeed to
satisfate his wait ^x^/ !!! I still give my best in all i do so thanks to have see it here too Dude ^w^ !!!

Thanks a lot for your big review too my friedn, i realy love receive coments it's what make me the most happy because if peoples let coment
it mean they realy was pleased and needed to tell itr so; here again, thanks a lot for your review ^w^ !!! And no worry.. i'll kepe doing my best for
each of you ;p !!!

Hake, I am not going to say anything that has not already been said, you have a unique talent for staging and dynamic posing. I am thinking back to the many times you have done pre-sketches for me to make it easier for the artist I am hiring to depict a complicated scenario I have in mind and then within minutes I have not only the idea I was looking for but an angle I had not expected, a pose or expression I had not considered. And later when I submit the pre sketch to the intended artist, more than once I have gotten back that they don't know if they can do it as well as the pre sketch or they ask what is left to do but color in the pre sketch. This is a gift. In short your style opens doors to new ideas where I did not even know there was a door. Remember that this comic started with you sketching Duncan, stuck in the swim ring saying he was not stuck. You already had posing and sketching down you merely needed time to learn how to do the finishing touches. I am happy that through patience I was not only able to see it finished but I got to watch your skill grow along the way. And now you have the confidence to draw commissions for others. Bravo!

haw god you're so walcome buddy >w< !!! All pleasure is for me and is just I looove details so i'm glad the pre-sketch i did for you still get usefull
to teh artists at the end , it's something i'm realy proud and also my dynamic-posing than will keep improve with practice hehe~~

God.. i can understand theyr feeling Xd.. is just me.; i still can't stop me to add details and at the ens i do the full draw myself in sketch XD... hope it never
have hurt anyone >x<....

Also glad my style open the door to new idea to you ^^ i'm realy hoonored to contribute at the good stuff you can imagin even if it's in part ^^ !

And yeah.. when i think about how all have start i still can't blieve we reched a so far point OwO.... I think it's one of the best project-colab i ever done
and be party of it is just so rewarding so.. thanks to have gove me this chance lance ^w^/ !!!!!!!!!!

it's glad to you and the otehrs i get enough cpnfidence for improve and finaly open-up commisison so.. thanks alaos for that buddy, I'll be not so
far without you guys around me >x< !!!!!!! And happy than, depsite teh looooong delay, than you were able to get something even better from me,
it took time but we did it lance !!!!!!!!!!

he's stuck :)

well he said he is not right ? ):3..... karma will show him it's not good to liaaar~~

XD let's not forget your sensitive too ^^

I...I don't know what you talking about >// 3/>"....

XD of course the denying XD