it's always a good day when you post =D

I was not expecting to see diapers in a poem, of all things, but I guess this actually works somehow...

it's kind of ironic that this is written from the viewpoint of a toddler but with a much more extensive vocabulary than said toddler would have xD

I love this! Add some pictures and it would be a perfect AB/DL babyfur book, hehe x3

I like it because I like poetry writing. And Snivy is the best!

Hehe. I liked reading through this. Not only are you experimenting with 'Picture Book' tales, but also poetry.

Perhaps you may make a peom to share more about some of your repeat OCs? Emily would be perfect as you could have the poem be about the preschooler from the perspective of her mother, Elizabeth. :)

I think a peom about VULLABY and her MANDIZBUZZ momma would be cute, too. You gave those two a nice mother / daughter relationship that SWANNA supports quite well. Maybe, as an alternative, you could make a poem from SWANNA's perspective of VULLABY & MANDIBUZZ? Maybe we find out that SWANNA could never have children? Or, as another view, SWANNA is an 'Empty Nester' who misses what it was to be a mommy?

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Lots of ways in which to further all that you have begun while paving a path forward in your Creative Writing journey. :)