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Peridot comes up with a neat way of making figures for a diorama - or in this case, a model railway.
This was done for LZ0291's BASILISK FUN PARTY contest. If you'd like to take part, the link is here! https://www.deviantart.com/lz0291/j.....test-940188995
This one is for the writing category, and I've used the prompts Instant, Frozen, Acceptance, Possession and Party. Might have overdone it on the prompts.
I feel like I'm rusty with long-form TF writing - and indeed, writing in general, so I decided to dip my toes back in with a collection of 'poof' TFs. One of the possible downsides is that it namedrops something like 65% of the entire cast of Steven Universe, but really you don't need much familiarity with the random BG characters - and they've all got wiki pages with pictures anyway.
I hope you enjoy - and please let me know which of the endings you think should be 'canon!'
Commissions are open! https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39892230/ https://www.furaffinity.net/commissions/e350/
Check out my Patreon to see new art a day early! https://www.patreon.com/e350
Steven Universe © Rebecca Sugar
This was done for LZ0291's BASILISK FUN PARTY contest. If you'd like to take part, the link is here! https://www.deviantart.com/lz0291/j.....test-940188995
This one is for the writing category, and I've used the prompts Instant, Frozen, Acceptance, Possession and Party. Might have overdone it on the prompts.
I feel like I'm rusty with long-form TF writing - and indeed, writing in general, so I decided to dip my toes back in with a collection of 'poof' TFs. One of the possible downsides is that it namedrops something like 65% of the entire cast of Steven Universe, but really you don't need much familiarity with the random BG characters - and they've all got wiki pages with pictures anyway.
I hope you enjoy - and please let me know which of the endings you think should be 'canon!'
Commissions are open! https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39892230/ https://www.furaffinity.net/commissions/e350/
Check out my Patreon to see new art a day early! https://www.patreon.com/e350
Steven Universe © Rebecca Sugar
Category Story / Fanart
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 156.2 kB
Thank you for writing this.
I definitely enjoy this.
Peridot going mad scientist (more than usual) was JUUUST plausible enough for the excuse plot.
My only regret is that we didn't get more POVs of those changed, the mental change is always the most fun part of any TF for me. And maybe more of a look at those affected by the 'this is normal' part of the device.
The 'blob of background characters' felt out of place, and ironically, the only part that was kinda disturbing.
I see you couldn't pass up the chance to make Marty a 'jackass victim.'
It honestly feels like a waste for Bluebird to turn all the figurines into a single statuette, but interesting.
I imagine Sapphire saw this coming but thought it was normal.
Ending D feeling a gag ending.
Ending C... We knew there was gonna be an ending like this, but it feel like the "raw material" got used up in this story, and there isn't much more to explore.
Ending B An interesting twist, and I enjoy if only because we get the most POV of the mental change. And shows Peridot couldn't think of everything.
Ending A Ironically has the most story potential for later.
I definitely enjoy this.
Peridot going mad scientist (more than usual) was JUUUST plausible enough for the excuse plot.
My only regret is that we didn't get more POVs of those changed, the mental change is always the most fun part of any TF for me. And maybe more of a look at those affected by the 'this is normal' part of the device.
The 'blob of background characters' felt out of place, and ironically, the only part that was kinda disturbing.
I see you couldn't pass up the chance to make Marty a 'jackass victim.'
It honestly feels like a waste for Bluebird to turn all the figurines into a single statuette, but interesting.
I imagine Sapphire saw this coming but thought it was normal.
Ending D feeling a gag ending.
Ending C... We knew there was gonna be an ending like this, but it feel like the "raw material" got used up in this story, and there isn't much more to explore.
Ending B An interesting twist, and I enjoy if only because we get the most POV of the mental change. And shows Peridot couldn't think of everything.
Ending A Ironically has the most story potential for later.
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