This is my first "real" short story, as it doesn't need any prior explination to lead up to it, such as my other stories, which I might post up later.

Right. Synopsis.

This is an original Redwall-based story based off of a character I used for a Redwall Roleplaying site, Kelchan, a ferret. In it, he and his mate, Tekla, are confronted by a press gang from a nearby vermin army, who wishes to recruit them to their cause. Be warned, this story does have a sad ending.

Feedback (preferably constructive critisism and non-negative comments) is appreciated. Enjoy!

If it isn't too much to ask, I -would- like to see a picture or two about this story >.> .....