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Due to the size of this story, this post includes the download of the reduced 1.0 fairytale version of the story. Here is the link to the full version as it stands (I am still working on the story, but you can see the live progress with this link) Google Docs:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/.....LLYxb9fsk/edit
Warning:
This story contains disturbing and gruesome content sometimes involving animals or animal-like creatures.
Reader discretion is advised!
Description:
Peace, love, happiness, but also torture, betrayal, despair.
Here is a fictional story of the struggle between good vs evil:
There is an empire filled with a great diversity of different creatures: Aquatic creatures, terrain creatures, aerial creatures; Four legs, or two legs; two legs and wings, or two legs and fins; scaley, furry, feathery, just plain skin, or a combination…
But out of all of these many different creatures, only one reigns over all and takes everything.
Welcome to The Supreme Raptor Empire.
All Raptors are supreme, and all others serve them… but not for long…
There is no comfort without pain.
I write this story to remind us how terrible we can be to each other, and then how great we can be to each other. I write this story to remind us why we must always be good to each other, no matter who or what we are.
…and for the entertainment of a great story of course.
Note:
I might make a less gruesome version of this story later that may have no torture at all and a lot less of an evil empire. Just an unfair, mean, and unfriendly one. Maybe gruesome-less to the point where it won’t be gruesome at all and reader discretion won’t necessarily be advised. But for now, it very much is.
This story is currently a WIP (work in progress);
This story is yet to be fully crafted into the whole detailed story. Use the link above to see the most recent version.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/.....LLYxb9fsk/edit
Warning:
This story contains disturbing and gruesome content sometimes involving animals or animal-like creatures.
Reader discretion is advised!
Description:
Peace, love, happiness, but also torture, betrayal, despair.
Here is a fictional story of the struggle between good vs evil:
There is an empire filled with a great diversity of different creatures: Aquatic creatures, terrain creatures, aerial creatures; Four legs, or two legs; two legs and wings, or two legs and fins; scaley, furry, feathery, just plain skin, or a combination…
But out of all of these many different creatures, only one reigns over all and takes everything.
Welcome to The Supreme Raptor Empire.
All Raptors are supreme, and all others serve them… but not for long…
There is no comfort without pain.
I write this story to remind us how terrible we can be to each other, and then how great we can be to each other. I write this story to remind us why we must always be good to each other, no matter who or what we are.
…and for the entertainment of a great story of course.
Note:
I might make a less gruesome version of this story later that may have no torture at all and a lot less of an evil empire. Just an unfair, mean, and unfriendly one. Maybe gruesome-less to the point where it won’t be gruesome at all and reader discretion won’t necessarily be advised. But for now, it very much is.
This story is currently a WIP (work in progress);
This story is yet to be fully crafted into the whole detailed story. Use the link above to see the most recent version.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 28.6 kB
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