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He is meant to be extremely effeminate. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4281904/ XP
I love writing dialogue, I also like to improvise (which is probably not the best for this comic) but I like to keep it natural while still pushing towards the end point/different scenarios, but in a organic way, and I think you do organic and natural well actually =)
a silent comic would be a nice practice on expressions and such, I just did one for a school project =3
also, he seems to have some dirty intentions (a plan from the beggining of his?<.<)
a silent comic would be a nice practice on expressions and such, I just did one for a school project =3
also, he seems to have some dirty intentions (a plan from the beggining of his?<.<)
Alright, your own problem when you get a surprise later on...
The derogatory language was unneccessary, thanks. It was a friendly bit of advice based off of your comment, which displayed some ignorance about the comic that could have been quickly remedied with the PSes.
Have a lovely evening.
PS. Have some courtesy toward others? Friendly comments are just friendly comments, I wasn't insulting you in the least. Thanks for the gift of less faith in my fandom on my birthday. <3
The derogatory language was unneccessary, thanks. It was a friendly bit of advice based off of your comment, which displayed some ignorance about the comic that could have been quickly remedied with the PSes.
Have a lovely evening.
PS. Have some courtesy toward others? Friendly comments are just friendly comments, I wasn't insulting you in the least. Thanks for the gift of less faith in my fandom on my birthday. <3
in the first panel it does look like nikki is making a sort of typical boy expression despite his feminine looks, and with a character like nikki I always wonder how his voice sounds, if maybe it's equally feminine or perhaps when people hear him speak they are in for a surprise X3
Hmmm. I'm suddenly reminded of a tradition we had at my grandmother's. On Christmas, there would always - at least at a side table - be a spare place setting in case someone in need were to come in.
That sort of tradition would have worked well here!
Anyway, watching with interest. Carry on. :)
That sort of tradition would have worked well here!
Anyway, watching with interest. Carry on. :)
Wish this scenario could actually happen. I can't help but identify with Nikki. Except I fall for the straight guys. >_<
Great work as usual Demi. Your characters are lively, realistic, warm, exuberant, full of personality, unique, and quite lovable, it's your comics I always enjoy the most for a reason. The colors are excellent, Anatomy is realistic, thin, lithe, love it. Facial expressions are half the fun, they're mischievous, welcoming, and friendly, really an excellent job on them. Love their winter clothing, the style, you do a great job making the clothe seem soft and malleable, as it should be. Great job with this so far, can't wait to see where this is going.
Great work as usual Demi. Your characters are lively, realistic, warm, exuberant, full of personality, unique, and quite lovable, it's your comics I always enjoy the most for a reason. The colors are excellent, Anatomy is realistic, thin, lithe, love it. Facial expressions are half the fun, they're mischievous, welcoming, and friendly, really an excellent job on them. Love their winter clothing, the style, you do a great job making the clothe seem soft and malleable, as it should be. Great job with this so far, can't wait to see where this is going.
flipping no, disappointed... yeah
it beyond me why we cant filter gay vs straight stuff here.
Im 100% straight myself and while i have nothing agains't gays it just doesn't do anything for me.
was hoping to see some more m/f action from my fav artist. guess that will have to wait...
it beyond me why we cant filter gay vs straight stuff here.
Im 100% straight myself and while i have nothing agains't gays it just doesn't do anything for me.
was hoping to see some more m/f action from my fav artist. guess that will have to wait...
Honestly, I agree that a filter would be a good idea, but I don't see why commenters take it out on the ARTIST. I have always been an artist who draws characters of any orientation, so it shouldn't be a shock. The first issue of the comic is straight so this one is gay. I need variety or I get bored drawing.
I think it's a good thing when an artist draws to meet multiple viewers interests :)
Not everyone is straight. Might as well draw something for that too!
Personally I'm straight as a nail and I'm not big on m/m art at all but I'm one with an idea of "whatever makes you happy" and as long as you're happy, and you aren't upsetting anyone else, all is well right? I thought it was a girl too xD, but now that I know it's not I'll not look at it the same, BUT, I appreciate the open minded drawing comic
Not everyone is straight. Might as well draw something for that too!
Personally I'm straight as a nail and I'm not big on m/m art at all but I'm one with an idea of "whatever makes you happy" and as long as you're happy, and you aren't upsetting anyone else, all is well right? I thought it was a girl too xD, but now that I know it's not I'll not look at it the same, BUT, I appreciate the open minded drawing comic
Ha! You're spoiling Nikki too much. Feminine face, female name - I am looking forward to all the screaming guys when their mental images get crushed. "Oh my, she is a boy! And I just thought about... Aaaah!" ^^
(And just to point out, I am not gay, so don't blame these guys for me. But it's still funny how much some men can freak out about this. I don't know why, but women seem to be much easier with homosexuality.)
Is Nikki a diminutive of some sort? Or his complete name?
(And just to point out, I am not gay, so don't blame these guys for me. But it's still funny how much some men can freak out about this. I don't know why, but women seem to be much easier with homosexuality.)
Is Nikki a diminutive of some sort? Or his complete name?
I don't think your dialog is that bad. It's tricky stuff to write, goodness knows and I fight with it a lot. But I think you do a pretty good job with it. It moves the story along, and it adds to your character's personalities. It's not Shakespeare maybe, but I don't think that's what you'd want for a little holiday comic like this anyway. What you've got is sweet and warm-hearted, and this page has a nice feel of family and friendship. So I think you're doing a great job.
I like your detail in the 3 panel, making the characters in black silhouettes.
It draws the eyes attention to the background "foreground" giving you a good feel of the atmosphere they are in.
I'm currently starting up on my own comic, where I'm slowly starting to learn all the tricks there are to guide the reader into certain mind sets..
And that one there is a new one to me, but I love it :D
It draws the eyes attention to the background "foreground" giving you a good feel of the atmosphere they are in.
I'm currently starting up on my own comic, where I'm slowly starting to learn all the tricks there are to guide the reader into certain mind sets..
And that one there is a new one to me, but I love it :D
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