2 chapters in one day! blasphamy!

and 5th keyword backwards? it MUST be chikorita /sarcasm

if you want, I can make it one every 2 days or something =)

and the question is answered

Wow, that is so cool that daddy, I mean Drek lol begins to teach is son how to use his fire. Charc is sure a quick study. He seems to have learned the basics very quickly. This could be a sign that he could grow up to be more powerful than all of them one day. He seems to have hidden potential. It's a shame that Zenith could not rally more numbers, especially knowing that Thael has so many followers. Still, hopefully they can prepare for them. Also, Thael's explanation of what happened to him, makes me sick. I can't believe that he has the nerve to say that bullshit to his servants. I mean, he completely left out the part how he attacked two children and that he was attacked my Zenith because he was rescuing Charc. What a creep! Now he wants revenge? That guy needs to realize he brought this on himself. Still, a great chapter!

PS. I have begun reading Chap 6 but have not read enough to comment on it yet. I probably won't read it until later this week. I know that my reviews are posted all at nearly the same time. The reason is I just got though reading the first 5 chapters straight through, yes, I could not stop. Now that I am taking a break, I wanted to write my reviews of the chapters I have read. I wonder what will happen next, once I finish reading it, I'll finally find out. Still I have my thoughts of what could happen next.

Oh wow, thanks for all the comments man! =D I'm glad you're liking the story and I can't thank you enough for taking the time to actually read it. I know it's a LOT to just say, "I'm gonna read this today" so it really is greatly appreciated. I look forward to reading the rest of your comments on the remaining chapters, and I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story! =)

Thanks Nogard, to tell you the truth, I wanted to read your story a long time ago, it just seemed to never be the right time to actually sit down and read it. I am one of those people that wants to read a lot at once rather than read a little over a long period of time. Also, just to say, I actually read your story, at least what I have read so far in Sofurry. I read it there because I did not want to download each chapter, it was faster to read them there. I noticed you said, you thought, no one would read because of the lack of sex in the story. I won't say that it wouldn't have been nice lol. Though, it was not necessary to have a sex scene for the story to be highly entertaining. Besides, that would not deter me from reading it either, because I waited to long to see what would happen next to just say, "Oh no sex forget it" I mean, I don't just read stories for the sex scenes lol. I was also, thinking how I could draw some scenes because I was able to picture in my head what it would look like, the problem, my art skills are pathetic lol.