IMPORTANT!!! READ FAMILY BONDS FIRST BEFORE READING THIS STORY IF YOU HAVEN'T ALREADY. THIS PICKS UP RIGHT WHERE FAMILY BONDS LEFT OFF, SO THINGS WILL GET SPOILED IF YOU HAVEN'T READ IT YET. FAMILY BONDS DOES CONTAIN ADULT CONTENT IN SOME OF THE CHAPTERS JUST AS A WARNING.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3147170/ <== Family Bonds Chapter 1 for those who haven't read it.
*yawn* I'm so tired >.< I almost forgot to submit this tonight because of how tired I am, but thankfully I remembered. Not much to say about this chapter. I think the end of this chapter was some of my "I've gotta meet that goal so write whatever you can think of" showing, but in revising/editing, I liked it so I kept it in. Anyway, comments appreciated as always *passed out*
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4934434 <== Chapter 1
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4939397 <== Chapter 2
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3147170/ <== Family Bonds Chapter 1 for those who haven't read it.
*yawn* I'm so tired >.< I almost forgot to submit this tonight because of how tired I am, but thankfully I remembered. Not much to say about this chapter. I think the end of this chapter was some of my "I've gotta meet that goal so write whatever you can think of" showing, but in revising/editing, I liked it so I kept it in. Anyway, comments appreciated as always *passed out*
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4934434 <== Chapter 1
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4939397 <== Chapter 2
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Wow, what a confrontation! At times, I was a little scared for Charc. Luckily, Zenith saved the day, and took care of that heartless jerk. Still, here we are again about the infamous "Blue Flame" still wondering what that mystery is about. It seems to me that the flame can only be summoned when it is really needed. Still epic battle, nice that you had Drek come out of it not looking like a weakling. I can feel the emotion too that is being described, great work!
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