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Woot! Finally done with my break from commisions,
Cuz I now see my premium membership went Bye Bye
Let me know if you see any errors in this one, Ill be glad to know
...... im tired now -_- off to bed :sleep:
Characters © Me
Cuz I now see my premium membership went Bye Bye
Let me know if you see any errors in this one, Ill be glad to know
...... im tired now -_- off to bed :sleep:
Characters © Me
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 465 x 1280px
File Size 136.9 kB
First off, the art is fantastic. I really love it. X3
But there are a few grammatical/spelling errors:
"Many artworks that is" should be "that are"
"relavant" -> relevant
You left off an l on "will" on the second to last sentence.
Finally, "of this particular artist who reigns this page" sounds off to me, but I'm not sure why. Maybe the way you have it worded is right.
But there are a few grammatical/spelling errors:
"Many artworks that is" should be "that are"
"relavant" -> relevant
You left off an l on "will" on the second to last sentence.
Finally, "of this particular artist who reigns this page" sounds off to me, but I'm not sure why. Maybe the way you have it worded is right.
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