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Wow. So much goodness here.
First off, thank you for the surprise cameo. I think you certainly picked a good tag team.
Oh man, where to begin. Okay, first off, the use of color really makes this comic. Should you decide to self publish this, please make sure there is a color version available. The color palette here already adds to the feeling of excitement and conflict-- and a nice use of foreshadowing, I think when you mention that boxers can fight in tag team matches or in single competetion-- Yosh is neatly bisected between red and blue.
I really like the one on one and tag team setup-- this allows for lots of action and you can make the ensemble as big as you wish to make it, adding in match-ups wherever you want.
There is so much humor, too. From the absurd settings, the call back to other characters, bushy's impassioned if impaired dialog, heck even the keywords are making me giggle. The layout of the pages so far reminds me of a wacky action manga. BB is shaping up to be an absurd, silly and fun action romp, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
First off, thank you for the surprise cameo. I think you certainly picked a good tag team.
Oh man, where to begin. Okay, first off, the use of color really makes this comic. Should you decide to self publish this, please make sure there is a color version available. The color palette here already adds to the feeling of excitement and conflict-- and a nice use of foreshadowing, I think when you mention that boxers can fight in tag team matches or in single competetion-- Yosh is neatly bisected between red and blue.
I really like the one on one and tag team setup-- this allows for lots of action and you can make the ensemble as big as you wish to make it, adding in match-ups wherever you want.
There is so much humor, too. From the absurd settings, the call back to other characters, bushy's impassioned if impaired dialog, heck even the keywords are making me giggle. The layout of the pages so far reminds me of a wacky action manga. BB is shaping up to be an absurd, silly and fun action romp, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
<LoL!> You really have come up with a winner with Bushy. Her faux pas' are so honest that it's easy to imagine how excited she'd get while allowing each one slip out without a care. If parents ever wanted an argument as to why their kids should take speech class in school, Bushy's your lady! :)
This said, I can see how Oxnard and Bushy are going to have a delightful dynamic going on throughout the series. The fights are going to be great, of course, but the hosts making it cool in their own way will ensure that even the in-between moments are filled with good times! Oopa!
<LoL! Again> Poor, Cooni. I could almost hear the spotlight coming on as it singles him out in the crowd for that segment of Bushy's breakdown of the battles. There's nothing worse than having a big finger pointing at you in a public scene. Moreover, a big finger that is making it seem like you're making a mess of yourself right in the front row. How embarassing!
Keeping in personal theme, I can't help but wonder which of those rings Aro will be reffing? Kazootles, if they threw him in the tag team one I bet he's in for scores of trouble. I also can't help but think that a person with a lot of Anger might give him guff about a call and threaten his health if they don't rule in favor of them? Would Aro buckle under the pressure? Guess we'll have to wait and see. :)
*Raises a glove to the air* Quack Attack is back, baby!
This said, I can see how Oxnard and Bushy are going to have a delightful dynamic going on throughout the series. The fights are going to be great, of course, but the hosts making it cool in their own way will ensure that even the in-between moments are filled with good times! Oopa!
<LoL! Again> Poor, Cooni. I could almost hear the spotlight coming on as it singles him out in the crowd for that segment of Bushy's breakdown of the battles. There's nothing worse than having a big finger pointing at you in a public scene. Moreover, a big finger that is making it seem like you're making a mess of yourself right in the front row. How embarassing!
Keeping in personal theme, I can't help but wonder which of those rings Aro will be reffing? Kazootles, if they threw him in the tag team one I bet he's in for scores of trouble. I also can't help but think that a person with a lot of Anger might give him guff about a call and threaten his health if they don't rule in favor of them? Would Aro buckle under the pressure? Guess we'll have to wait and see. :)
*Raises a glove to the air* Quack Attack is back, baby!
Haha, I'm glad that new characters don't always have to be a bad idea! X3 And I had to take Speech Class too. ;O; Though I dunno how much lucky Bushy will have with it givin' those biggole teeth and plump cheeks!
Aaand I figured that would be very embarrassing and not fun. X3 Even if she was just teasing a little, her natural Bushyness made it 10 times worse!
Good luck to you and Toroth! :D I figured you'd be a good batch'a team mates!
Aaand I figured that would be very embarrassing and not fun. X3 Even if she was just teasing a little, her natural Bushyness made it 10 times worse!
Good luck to you and Toroth! :D I figured you'd be a good batch'a team mates!
And a great second page! :D Bushy's so cute, even if she does accidentally have a foul mouth sometimes. I think her card works well here - nothin's wrong with a bit of foreshadowing of Sweaty's story. I'm lookin' forward to hearing about that! It seems like this part of the comic could even be the toughest, since explanation of the rules has the potential to get kinda boring. But you spiced it up with plenty of fun lil jokes and cool and exciting designs and layout and cute characters! With one spot for people with no friends and one spot for people who can't fight EVERYBODY gets to be a loser. And especially poor Cooni, gettin' picked on again! Bushy couldn't just let him sit back and watch the tournament in peace. *giggles* And while Bushy's giving the rules for the boxing tournament, Oxxy's laying down some rules for her! Though it doesn't seem likely she's gonna follow them very well. But it's silly and fun to watch him try! :D Still lookin' forward to more as you make 'em!
Woop woop! Hopefully I can keep that balance between not-enough-information and too-much-info! (: Hehe, and yeah, rules are usually boring but I guess these sorta areas are good for little subtle things you can slip in! X3 I think I'll have trouble making other events fun to read through but I'll keep trying! :3 Rules for everyooooone! Thanks Bosk. (:
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