Not quite done yet, guys. I have an epilogue to write.
I feel that this chapter is very bland and "forced" and not nearly as good as it could have been. I kept trying and trying to describe what was happening and trying to have dialogue that fit well and sounded like an actual conversation to me, but it just... doesn't feel right. I'll be editing the hell out of this one...
I feel that this chapter is very bland and "forced" and not nearly as good as it could have been. I kept trying and trying to describe what was happening and trying to have dialogue that fit well and sounded like an actual conversation to me, but it just... doesn't feel right. I'll be editing the hell out of this one...
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 7.6 kB
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