The outfit only told Meldihnyia one thing, this was the infamous Ey’Nid Vaux.
Grand Admiral Ey’Nid Vaux. Commander of the entire Conjoined Arms Human-Odraani fleet and Liaison for the Paktum in the Human solar system. Esteemed war hero, unofficial politician and devout peoples soldier, Ey’Nid Vaux was perhaps the highest ranking individual for lightyears in any direction.
Most certainly higher ranking than any Commodore.
“Uh…” Meldihnyia muttered, choking on a series of guttural squeak’s as her knees buckled, instinctively readjusting her glove while the Grand Admiral passed down a hearty salute with her talon like gloves, pressing the brim of her beret that held aloft the military insignia of the Odraani.
“Grand Admiral Ey’Nid Vaux, at your service!” The Grand Admiral piped up, folding her arms behind her back as she stiffened her stance with pride. “But, I presume you already know that! I apologize for my absence at the launching ceremony, certain matters acquired my particular attention, especially on a flag ship such as the Lewis & Clark!”
“Umm…”
“Breathtaking, isn’t it? By far the fastest ship I have ever set foot on, perfectly encapsulating the Human Spirit against the cruel indifference of the universe, as its local sardonic inhabitants seem inclined to suggest!”
“Ah jeeze…!”
“Do not fret, an Ensign like you will find yourself quite at home, far from the dangers of the void as the lack of medical equipment that is so prevalent on our usual uniform would suggest!”
“Oh my…!”
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Just a brief snippet from a short story I wrote featuring my Odraani OC's who are central characters in a much larger project but for goofs and gaffs I decided it would be fun to portray their first interaction. You can read the whole story below! Mind you It's not as in-depth as my usual writing scheme and is missing a TON of Odra terminology for the setting. With a heavy dosage of Alternate Universe Material so your mileage on canon may vary ^^'
https://docs.google.com/document/d/.....it?usp=sharing
Art-wise, a wonderful commission done by the one and only MrMcArthur from DA! https://www.deviantart.com/mrmcarthur Who has an amazing eye for women in uniform and particularly cool pairs of boots, so hats off to him for cranking out such an esoteric pair for Ey'Nid, but also doing such a cute job on Officer Meldihnyia who was more then happy to detail despite having no existing references for her when the commission started ^^
Still not entirely settled on Ey'Nid's color scheme aside from her uniform, as despite her intentionally anachronistic uniform I wanted her scales to portray her unusually warm and down-to-earth personality which is in deep contrast to the usual commanding hardasses I grew up watching on 80's and 90's cinema. Took a lot of inspiration from Captain Amelia and real world examples such as Soviet General Georgy Zhukov and French WW1 Commander Philippe Pétain so hopefully in time I can figure out a better suitable color scheme but as it stands I do like her palette against her blue uniform c:
Oh yeah, and I totally just ripped her species off from https://www.furaffinity.net/user/darbaras own OC Helena Kottman. What can I say, Lizzards with feathers are DOPE :D
Regardless, I'm stoked with how this turned out and this won't be the last time we see these two, especially Mel! ;)
Art - https://www.deviantart.com/mrmcarthur
Mel and Ey'Nid - Moi
Odraani Universe and setting - The one and only https://www.furaffinity.net/user/darbaras
Grand Admiral Ey’Nid Vaux. Commander of the entire Conjoined Arms Human-Odraani fleet and Liaison for the Paktum in the Human solar system. Esteemed war hero, unofficial politician and devout peoples soldier, Ey’Nid Vaux was perhaps the highest ranking individual for lightyears in any direction.
Most certainly higher ranking than any Commodore.
“Uh…” Meldihnyia muttered, choking on a series of guttural squeak’s as her knees buckled, instinctively readjusting her glove while the Grand Admiral passed down a hearty salute with her talon like gloves, pressing the brim of her beret that held aloft the military insignia of the Odraani.
“Grand Admiral Ey’Nid Vaux, at your service!” The Grand Admiral piped up, folding her arms behind her back as she stiffened her stance with pride. “But, I presume you already know that! I apologize for my absence at the launching ceremony, certain matters acquired my particular attention, especially on a flag ship such as the Lewis & Clark!”
“Umm…”
“Breathtaking, isn’t it? By far the fastest ship I have ever set foot on, perfectly encapsulating the Human Spirit against the cruel indifference of the universe, as its local sardonic inhabitants seem inclined to suggest!”
“Ah jeeze…!”
“Do not fret, an Ensign like you will find yourself quite at home, far from the dangers of the void as the lack of medical equipment that is so prevalent on our usual uniform would suggest!”
“Oh my…!”
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Just a brief snippet from a short story I wrote featuring my Odraani OC's who are central characters in a much larger project but for goofs and gaffs I decided it would be fun to portray their first interaction. You can read the whole story below! Mind you It's not as in-depth as my usual writing scheme and is missing a TON of Odra terminology for the setting. With a heavy dosage of Alternate Universe Material so your mileage on canon may vary ^^'
https://docs.google.com/document/d/.....it?usp=sharing
Art-wise, a wonderful commission done by the one and only MrMcArthur from DA! https://www.deviantart.com/mrmcarthur Who has an amazing eye for women in uniform and particularly cool pairs of boots, so hats off to him for cranking out such an esoteric pair for Ey'Nid, but also doing such a cute job on Officer Meldihnyia who was more then happy to detail despite having no existing references for her when the commission started ^^
Still not entirely settled on Ey'Nid's color scheme aside from her uniform, as despite her intentionally anachronistic uniform I wanted her scales to portray her unusually warm and down-to-earth personality which is in deep contrast to the usual commanding hardasses I grew up watching on 80's and 90's cinema. Took a lot of inspiration from Captain Amelia and real world examples such as Soviet General Georgy Zhukov and French WW1 Commander Philippe Pétain so hopefully in time I can figure out a better suitable color scheme but as it stands I do like her palette against her blue uniform c:
Oh yeah, and I totally just ripped her species off from https://www.furaffinity.net/user/darbaras own OC Helena Kottman. What can I say, Lizzards with feathers are DOPE :D
Regardless, I'm stoked with how this turned out and this won't be the last time we see these two, especially Mel! ;)
Art - https://www.deviantart.com/mrmcarthur
Mel and Ey'Nid - Moi
Odraani Universe and setting - The one and only https://www.furaffinity.net/user/darbaras
Category Artwork (Digital) / 70s
Species Reptilian (Other)
Size 1280 x 1005px
File Size 178.3 kB
I see that! Although tbh, Mel's officer uniform would be inaccurate since she's an Ensign xD
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/48542634/
I like Ey'Nid's unique style too!
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/48542634/
I like Ey'Nid's unique style too!
I'm actually planning a major story that serves as an unofficial and very-much headcannon sequel to Darbaras' story "Null" Titled "Null and Void" with one chapter complete and another nearing the end which will predominantly feature Vaux so far but Nelx will also play a major roll in Chapter 3 onward.
Outside of that, I do have other more humorous stories involving Nelx that I'm looking into whipping up that deals with her anxieties as a Communications Officer ^^
Outside of that, I do have other more humorous stories involving Nelx that I'm looking into whipping up that deals with her anxieties as a Communications Officer ^^
Damn, a fanfic sequel to Null! If you don't mind may I ask what the synopsis of the story will be? It's one of my favorite stories and I would love to see others' interpretations of it!
And they both are very cute, maybe I can give poor Nelx a hand on how to compose herself :p
And they both are very cute, maybe I can give poor Nelx a hand on how to compose herself :p
"Null and Void" Would be set a month or so after the Kamrilli incident in an alternate headcannon where the Odraani has made first contact with Humanity in the mid 00's. Without spoiling too much, an Anomaly has occurred during the cleanup operation that has trapped the military, engineering and civilian personal inside, resulting in both Human and Odraani authorities attempting to keep the nature of the incident under control while Civilian onlookers and Secret Government agents interfere with the investigation.
I was quite taken by the lack of a real central villain in "Null" and I'd like to do the same here, where even the most vile character (Which I have a sneaking suspicion everyone is going to hate with a burning passion lol) has perfectly logical and even morally direct reasons for doing so. Anti-Villain Government Agents are rarely done and I'm definitely gonna have fun detailing their interactions with the Odraani once I get to that stage ^^
I've actually commissioned the first Chapter's header image awhile back, featuring the two central characters of Chapter 1. https://www.deviantart.com/moealmig.....sing-928063664 but I've since settled on trying to get up until Chapter 3 or 4 before posting the whole set, though, just so I keep some folks satisfied if they actually enjoy what they are reading ^^
Keep an eye out! I've considered releasing chapters in two's thus far! Also the header I write for that commission isn't up to spec with my skills as I pumped that out in just two minutes late at night lol :D
I was quite taken by the lack of a real central villain in "Null" and I'd like to do the same here, where even the most vile character (Which I have a sneaking suspicion everyone is going to hate with a burning passion lol) has perfectly logical and even morally direct reasons for doing so. Anti-Villain Government Agents are rarely done and I'm definitely gonna have fun detailing their interactions with the Odraani once I get to that stage ^^
I've actually commissioned the first Chapter's header image awhile back, featuring the two central characters of Chapter 1. https://www.deviantart.com/moealmig.....sing-928063664 but I've since settled on trying to get up until Chapter 3 or 4 before posting the whole set, though, just so I keep some folks satisfied if they actually enjoy what they are reading ^^
Keep an eye out! I've considered releasing chapters in two's thus far! Also the header I write for that commission isn't up to spec with my skills as I pumped that out in just two minutes late at night lol :D
That's alright! You can always clean up the rest once you have the ideas in line for the plot!
And ooh, I'm really excited to see your take on how you handle the ambiguous antagonist in this story, it'll certainly leave a lot of mass guessing on how that Anomaly would affect how the people trapped inside handle their situation, and how Nelx and Vaux would come into play!
Also let's not forget the human factor with that government agent and all the political intrigues entailed in a massive cover-up for a cover-up, it'll be quite a read for sure :3
And ooh, I'm really excited to see your take on how you handle the ambiguous antagonist in this story, it'll certainly leave a lot of mass guessing on how that Anomaly would affect how the people trapped inside handle their situation, and how Nelx and Vaux would come into play!
Also let's not forget the human factor with that government agent and all the political intrigues entailed in a massive cover-up for a cover-up, it'll be quite a read for sure :3
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