First minute was sorta long and boring. I wasn't really a fan of it...
Then the strings kicked in, and I liked it.
The outro was alright. Nothing stellar.

The guitar tone was also a bit weird... Sorta sounded like it was being played through a cardboard tube...

Overall, it was alright.

yeah I agree with you on the intro, though it waasn't really that long, when it kicks into the main tune it kinda sets there, when I dicided the main tune would be a bit too boreing I dicided to change the tune up by adding my other songs into it makeing it more of a point where Metal kitty remembers her past before and during the accidentthen of cours her first activation. though towards the end I wanted too make it more chaotic so I added that gross guitar effect that I used in a song a looooooooooooong time ago

does that help explain the oddness of the whole song? o.o