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Thank you so much for reading my first vore comic :3 I hope you enjoyed it X3
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Strawberry felt the muscles around him pushing him back. They pulsed and throbbed around him as he struggled to stay at the entrance of the throat. They relaxed for a little bit, and the fox became uneasy. That could only mean one thing. He impulsively let out a small cry for help before the large tongue powerfully gulped him down the throat. The dog let out a loud, satisfied noise as its snack was finally down its gullet, its tongue lolling out of its mouth happily. Meanwhile, Strawberrys body slid down the slimy tube and plopped out into the warm, wet stomach where he could do nothing but wait for his release.
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Strawberry felt the muscles around him pushing him back. They pulsed and throbbed around him as he struggled to stay at the entrance of the throat. They relaxed for a little bit, and the fox became uneasy. That could only mean one thing. He impulsively let out a small cry for help before the large tongue powerfully gulped him down the throat. The dog let out a loud, satisfied noise as its snack was finally down its gullet, its tongue lolling out of its mouth happily. Meanwhile, Strawberrys body slid down the slimy tube and plopped out into the warm, wet stomach where he could do nothing but wait for his release.
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Prev> Page 9-9 <link
Category All / Vore
Species Fox (Other)
Size 1067 x 1280px
File Size 434.4 kB
First off. Please forgive me for only commenting only on the final page. It just might be a little more organized thoughts this way.
But wow! This whole comic has some really inspiring use of colors and motions. Your build up, pacing and attention to small details is absolutely enjoyable! And if you don't mind, I'd like to point out some details that I think you did great with.
The tongue interaction with the teeth, especially in the first two pages. I love how you had the canine tooth on the left of page 1 actually deforming the tongue. Thats a detail that I rarely see attempted.
While personally not a huge fan of excessive drool. You did an amazing job not using the drool as just a set prop. All through the comic, the fact that you use the drool and strands to emphasize movement and direction Is a great touch that leads the eye around the pages.
A lastly, like I kinda highlighted in your animation. You have a phenomenal skill for muscle movement. The way that the tongue moves in many of the frames moves the whole tongue and not just a small part of it. I think the best example is your work on page 8, frame 2. As the tongue lifts the little one not only does the whole tongue muscle move. But the throat muscles look like they react to the movement. I can't vouch for how realistic a lot of the movement is, but it definitely feels believable.
Awesome work! And sorry for the weird gush.
But wow! This whole comic has some really inspiring use of colors and motions. Your build up, pacing and attention to small details is absolutely enjoyable! And if you don't mind, I'd like to point out some details that I think you did great with.
The tongue interaction with the teeth, especially in the first two pages. I love how you had the canine tooth on the left of page 1 actually deforming the tongue. Thats a detail that I rarely see attempted.
While personally not a huge fan of excessive drool. You did an amazing job not using the drool as just a set prop. All through the comic, the fact that you use the drool and strands to emphasize movement and direction Is a great touch that leads the eye around the pages.
A lastly, like I kinda highlighted in your animation. You have a phenomenal skill for muscle movement. The way that the tongue moves in many of the frames moves the whole tongue and not just a small part of it. I think the best example is your work on page 8, frame 2. As the tongue lifts the little one not only does the whole tongue muscle move. But the throat muscles look like they react to the movement. I can't vouch for how realistic a lot of the movement is, but it definitely feels believable.
Awesome work! And sorry for the weird gush.
Its ok! I really do appreciate a comment like this! It's very kind of you to even leave such a positive comment on things you noticed!
I'm very glad that you pointed out all of these details! It makes me happy to see :)
I tried my best to do what felt natural and tried to focus on the organics of maw, so folds in the tongue and muscles moving in motion with other parts felt correct to do. I agree that the motions aren't 100% realistic, but im glad they come across as believable! :3
And thank you for pointing out the use of drool, i didnt even notice that i was using it in that way, so thank you for letting me know >w< I kinda just thought of it as a use for framing the panels, but im glad the drool got more use than that :3
But yeah im really glad to have read this, its very informative and I hope i can keep these details in the future! Thank you so much for letting me know this, i really appreciate every word of it!! X3 ~<3
I'm very glad that you pointed out all of these details! It makes me happy to see :)
I tried my best to do what felt natural and tried to focus on the organics of maw, so folds in the tongue and muscles moving in motion with other parts felt correct to do. I agree that the motions aren't 100% realistic, but im glad they come across as believable! :3
And thank you for pointing out the use of drool, i didnt even notice that i was using it in that way, so thank you for letting me know >w< I kinda just thought of it as a use for framing the panels, but im glad the drool got more use than that :3
But yeah im really glad to have read this, its very informative and I hope i can keep these details in the future! Thank you so much for letting me know this, i really appreciate every word of it!! X3 ~<3
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