Parts of the black clothing are still looking flat and one-dimensional, and the star field is looking like a flat black background with undifferentiated white dots in it - aside from those two things that catch my eye as amateurish touches, everything else - she, for example - her face, coloring and shading, expression, dress, design, pose, all about her, the rest about the you character - all real vivid and true seeming, all excellent looking - it's because they are that these things I criticize pop out at me, because they are starkly different.

This is really looking great so far...