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Well shit, I decided to flesh out a backstory for Arqian. Give it a read. I did this in like an hour while sleep deprived so if you see anything that doesn't make sense, or you just have genuine criticism, don't hesitate to tell me in the comments/notes.
No lewds. Feel free to show this to friends/family if you so choose.
No lewds. Feel free to show this to friends/family if you so choose.
Category Story / All
Species Red Panda
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 82 kB
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Take your time and this includes the edit and the rewrite. It goes a long way. Block paragraphs kill readership.
When there is a change in speaker or new speaker, create a new paragraph. if the quote is that massive break it. A paragraph every new agent acting too. So The Doctor reacting can be a new paragraph.
Don't do Bold for actions, just leave it the same.
When there is a change in speaker or new speaker, create a new paragraph. if the quote is that massive break it. A paragraph every new agent acting too. So The Doctor reacting can be a new paragraph.
Don't do Bold for actions, just leave it the same.
My favorite fact on black holes is that the singularity is not a point in space, but a point in time. This means that the singularity is not at the center of a black hole, but in the future of anything that falls in. I find that this is a good fact to just sit and think about while listening to music. Other than that, it is a interesting story.
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